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「こんなヒトにはなりたくなかったよ――」 Spare change? I need to pay for rent & living expenses. (Or hire me to do something.) Last edited by Strangelove; 05/16/2012 at 11:33 PM. |
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#167 |
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「こんなヒトにはなりたくなかったよ――」 Spare change? I need to pay for rent & living expenses. (Or hire me to do something.) |
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#168 |
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Hito that was great and you are awesome.
Rufus likes to make speeches, just his father, and I guess Tseng is paid to listen. But seriously, isn't that speech an info-dump, inserted on the off-chance that somebody reading this book might never have heard of FFVII and might not know who Sephiroth is? I really, really hope they don't try to make Rufus unambiguously good. That really would be a retcon. I love the descriptions of all the NPCs extras people: Throp (is that really his name? Not 'Thorpe"?) big and tall with an unwashed mop of hair and doughy round the middle; the plump young man with the glasses and green trousers. It looks as if Tseng is getting information out of Throp the good old-fashioned "Turk way". But I can't help feeling it was a bit unnecessary. Surely Throp would have squealed the moment Tseng offered to hit him? I really liked this line: "This man symbolised the current state of the Shinra Company. "
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The thing about Rufus was mostly in jest, though it does seem a bit redundant overall.
I think this is where Nojima has improved since On The Way To A Smile. There's more character to the prose this time, compared to OTWTAS which as I recall could be rather minimal. (Not that minimal is necessarily a bad thing, guess it depends on what you're aiming for.) At one point I had 'Thrope' but reverted it to 'Throp' to keep with the sound of the original pronunciation (rhymes with 'slop'). But names are sometimes subtly changed from one language to the next (to not use examples from my work on this so far, there's Vanille [Vanilla] in FFXIII, Gabranth [Gabrath] in FFXII, Rikku [Ryukku] and Paine [Pine] from FFX/X-2, etc.), and 'throp' is more often found at the end of names (Northrop, Winthrop) so might not be too fitting as a standalone name. To make wild theories about this, I guess it could be because they brought him in and he betrayed them. Elena makes a comment about underestimating Shinra, and maybe getting beaten up while tied to a chair is the price for that.
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#170 |
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It is a good chunk of text though! I've only translated subtitles, but even that took time. This must have taken you quite some time.
Thank you so much. I read it right away when I saw the update, and I loved it. I can "see" everything happening. I also believe Rufus saying that to Tseng is a way of letting new readers (or at least readers who only knows that Sephiroth is the bad guy of VII) know how it all fits together. Also, I guess it can be sort of an old man rambling even though he knows the listeners knows all of it. Hence Tseng's "Yes".
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#171 |
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"Yes" Tseng said, he cursed inwardly: Why are you telling me all this? I've worked for the company for more than 10 years, I know about the friggin Jenova Project!
![]() Great as always Hito. I was particularly happy to read Tseng has meticulous handwriting (as if it could be anything but!) Glad that Elena actually spearheaded the project there, shes not just a pretty face. I agree with Hito's theory on why Tseng gave the guy a smack. By the sounds of things this Throp character is a bit of a blundering fool, probably couldn't believe his luck that Shinra wanted him to work for them, and its kind of obvious that he figured Shinra wasn't as powerful as they used to be. Plus we don't know that Fabio Brown and the people who he operates with are even more threatening (to Throp anyway) One thing: 'had traded their conscious for a brilliant mind.' I think this is meant to be 'conscience/s' |
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#172 |
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if i get left in peace to work on this, i will try to work on this for this week (◕‿◕✿)
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#173 |
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so hey no one actually ever leaves me in peace until it's late at night and i should be sleeping what do you know
so here's the first couple of pages of chapter 3 that i haven't edited (SPOILER) mini note on ch3
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「こんなヒトにはなりたくなかったよ――」 Spare change? I need to pay for rent & living expenses. (Or hire me to do something.) |
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#174 |
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「こんなヒトにはなりたくなかったよ――」 Spare change? I need to pay for rent & living expenses. (Or hire me to do something.) |
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#175 |
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as a pointless heads-up, the next update will be chapters 4 and 5 since chapter 5 is only about two paragraphs
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「こんなヒトにはなりたくなかったよ――」 Spare change? I need to pay for rent & living expenses. (Or hire me to do something.) |
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#176 |
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in fact, here's chapter five early if you're willing to skip chapter four because it's short and an elena chapter so i did it anyway
(SPOILER)
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「こんなヒトにはなりたくなかったよ――」 Spare change? I need to pay for rent & living expenses. (Or hire me to do something.) Last edited by Strangelove; 08/13/2012 at 05:17 PM. |
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#178 |
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Is this still a work in progress? I see the posts end around August and its now almost December with no updates. Really looking forward to be able to read this story, the only language I speak/read is English so the complete translation would be wonderful.
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#179 |
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Yes I have been wondering as well. I think Hito might of gave up on it? Or maybe he is to busy right now to work on it, but I hope it does get finished. I love the Turks and would love to read the whole novel.
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#180 |
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Maybe we should have a whhip round to remunarate him for his efforts. How much would you be willing to pay for this in a bookstore?
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