"Bittersweet Homecoming"

[Nandemoyasan]

I decided to just write a song without really thinking about it too much.

https://www.reverbnation.com/johnnynorrisjr/song/32262556-bittersweet-homecoming

This was done over the last 2 days.

 

[Prism]

I dig it. There’s a very nostalgic quality that this song has, and the tones the electric guitar and vocals give are really pleasant when combined...yeah, damn, I really love that guitar part, actually - my only critique is that the strumming of the acoustic guitar is a bit too loud. Good work!

 

[Nandemoyasan]

my only critique is that the strumming of the acoustic guitar is a bit too loud.

You're right and I just did another mix of it. It's already uploaded.

https://www.reverbnation.com/johnnynorrisjr/song/32262556-bittersweet-homecoming

Try that one on for size. Thanks for the heads up. I tend to forget that guitars get to be 6 voices at once, unlike any other instrument, when they're strummed that way.