Make DoC good

[Roger]

Well okay, lt's see now.

- Deepground needs to be far smaller or alternatively have bred/built a non-human army somehow.
- Their uniforms and equipment could do without blue Mako powerlines. Mako doesn't work like that.
- Ditto for you know, Azul's face.
- Them being SOLDIER, they should have blue eyes. (there's one thing they did right, despite them getting the colour wrong as often as not, they actually did glow for once, which is nice)
- In fact, they should get a general reimagining costumewise. let however did CC instead take care of it.
- Say that beyond a hospital it was originally a weapons factory and testing facility that Scarlet commissioned.
- Give Shalua a non fanservicy fighting game outfit to wear. Under her labcoat.
- Have Cloud, Tifa, Denzel and Marlene appear in the Edge chapter. Or at least confirm their safety for God sakes.
- Let Yuffie keep her AC outfit. (the Hobo Moogle Ninja disguise can stay)
- Give Reeve an actual suit.
- And don't let him converse with Cait Sith.
- I don't need to be an actual thesis, but Lucretia's little poem needs to go. A fairly simplistic research document will do.

I'll tackle the whole Hojo thing later.

 

[Obsidian Fire]

I don't need to be an actual thesis, but Lucretia's little poem needs to go. A fairly simplistic research document will do.

To go with this:

Give Lucretia a reason to be interested in Chaos. It has to be good enough that she would get all the funding needed to go to the Crystal Cave. In FFVII you either needed a Blue Chocobo or the submarine to get there so it's not like it's just a trip to some random cave. She had to have evidence from somewhere that Chaos was there.

As an alternative, who says Lucretia's little poem was actually her writing? Yes, it's in her research, but her research is incomplete because the FFVII internet crashed. For all we know it's something the Cetra wrote and Lucretia found and translated.

A reason why Vincent is interested romantically in Lucretia. We know he's interested in her, but that's all; we don't know why he's interested in her. He's in his late twenties too, so it isn't like this is his first crush either. What makes this harder is that we don't know anything about Vincent's past other then that he is a Turk and that his father was a scientist.

 

[AerithLives]

A Dallas style "it was all a dream" ending. Vincent wakes up in his coffin and goes to the shower to find Tifa in there...washing...all soapy *BITCHSLAP* aaaaand carries on the original ff7 story line like DoC ever happened!