futurestoryteller
Lv. 25 Adventurer
A year ago or so I finished Max Payne 3 for the second time. Immediately after I went to my computer and typed this up:
There really is no context. Just what popped into my head at the time.
I was pretty heavy in to fan-fiction, that's actually why I came here. However, I'm currently unemployed, so I don't have much time to continue writing. But I thought at least I'd share a sample with you guys from an old ghost, and get your opinions. If you'd be so kind.
I did want to showcase these quotes, because I'm proud of them, but the point of the thread is more about whether there might be a Max Payne 4, and what it could be about, considering how washed up Max was in the previous game.
Back when I wrote this I had pictured a continuation called "Super Max" (clever I know "Is this fool serious right now") It would have revolved around Max's incarceration at a "Super Maximum Security Detention Facility" and a staged escape as some kind of politician's PR stunt (I hadn't quite worked out the details of exactly who, or for what reason) - which would have eventually seen Max exposing corruption in the for-profit Prison System through a hail of gunfire.
I never started a fan fiction. The main reason being; difficulty trying to see the narrative in a "non-video game" structure . When I couldn't picture the details necessary to make that happen I gave up on it. Another (smaller) reason was I thought trying to read an entire story in Max's near soliloquys would be insufferable. Even though without them it wouldn't be Max Payne.
Anyway, after the class disparity and corruption issues that were brought up in MP3, this was the next logical step to me. I don't see a Max Payne 4 in the cards, but if they were going to, that's the kind of thing I think of when I try to picture it.
"My head was a carousel, spinning unnaturally fast, ready to fly off it's hinges and crash into the ocean."
There really is no context. Just what popped into my head at the time.
"I felt like a character in a Ramond Chandler story, or one of those dime store pulp magazines. But then I had amassed a body count of hundreds; worthy of any eighties action hero - a parody of one even - and just as much of a joke. I often found myself gliding through corridors, gun in hand, blasting away bad guys like I had arcade fever and a high score to maintain. Ever since that night. An essembly line of bloody corpses and bullet wounds. But I always walked away. I wouldn't have been surprised if someone told me this was hell, and I'd been killed long ago. What better punishment than to force a man through the worst trials of his life, on an endless cycle, pushing him towards an illusory conclusion he'd already reached; else he wouldn't be there."
I was pretty heavy in to fan-fiction, that's actually why I came here. However, I'm currently unemployed, so I don't have much time to continue writing. But I thought at least I'd share a sample with you guys from an old ghost, and get your opinions. If you'd be so kind.
I did want to showcase these quotes, because I'm proud of them, but the point of the thread is more about whether there might be a Max Payne 4, and what it could be about, considering how washed up Max was in the previous game.
"I was no hero. Heroes rescued, I revenged. Anyone looking to me for protection was looking to build a bomb with faulty hands; begging the thing to go off in their face."
Back when I wrote this I had pictured a continuation called "Super Max" (clever I know "Is this fool serious right now") It would have revolved around Max's incarceration at a "Super Maximum Security Detention Facility" and a staged escape as some kind of politician's PR stunt (I hadn't quite worked out the details of exactly who, or for what reason) - which would have eventually seen Max exposing corruption in the for-profit Prison System through a hail of gunfire.
"'Any fool has sense enough to come in out of the rain.' But I was a special kind of fool, and this was a special kind of rain; 9mm hollow points, and I'd appointed myself Rain Man and rain maker, when this storm hit, I didn't have the good sense to get out of it's way, but no goon had any good sense to get out of mine, either. Maybe time really does heal all wounds, I wouldn't know. My anger over lost loved ones had never faded, no matter how many bourbans I choked down, all it ever did was blur time, so that their deaths might well've happened yesterday. It was my dark cloud. So I did my rain dance in memoriam. And these idiots rode the short bus straight for Hurricane Michelle. Perhaps on an especially torturous day; Hurrican Rose. Who was I kidding - it was always: 'Hurricane Payne.' There was no escape, no 'eye' to this storm, just a big black hole, where a sad sack named Max used to be.'"
I never started a fan fiction. The main reason being; difficulty trying to see the narrative in a "non-video game" structure . When I couldn't picture the details necessary to make that happen I gave up on it. Another (smaller) reason was I thought trying to read an entire story in Max's near soliloquys would be insufferable. Even though without them it wouldn't be Max Payne.
Anyway, after the class disparity and corruption issues that were brought up in MP3, this was the next logical step to me. I don't see a Max Payne 4 in the cards, but if they were going to, that's the kind of thing I think of when I try to picture it.