Pixel
The Pixie King
I was thinking of maybe putting something at the start as a kinda lead in, where he stumbles into the church after geostigma symptoms manifest for the first time, and collapses on the floor or just lies down on a bench feeling sorry for himself.
I think chronologically this could happen after the "I want to drink alone scene". Here's my idea for that scene:
Cloud is experiencing pain in his left arm and decides to pour himself a whiskey (something hard ). He doesnt usually drink, so Tifa finds it strange. As he sits drinking it, rubbing his sore arm, that convo happens and tifa walks off. As she turns to go upstairs, she sees Marlene sitting on the stairs, listening to them. Tifa continues upstairs, and Cloud sees Marlene. "Damn it...", he mutters. Marlene goes upstairs, and Cloud leaves, gets on his bike, and rides to the church. As he approaches on his bike, geostigma strikes and he skids, falling off the bike. Then he stumbles into the church.
I think chronologically this could happen after the "I want to drink alone scene". Here's my idea for that scene:
Cloud is experiencing pain in his left arm and decides to pour himself a whiskey (something hard ). He doesnt usually drink, so Tifa finds it strange. As he sits drinking it, rubbing his sore arm, that convo happens and tifa walks off. As she turns to go upstairs, she sees Marlene sitting on the stairs, listening to them. Tifa continues upstairs, and Cloud sees Marlene. "Damn it...", he mutters. Marlene goes upstairs, and Cloud leaves, gets on his bike, and rides to the church. As he approaches on his bike, geostigma strikes and he skids, falling off the bike. Then he stumbles into the church.