You were quite fortunated withthe choice of the stock: good depth and motion. It's good to work with this kind of stuff.
Try avoiding putting such image crossing the whole tag, though. It doesn't feel right to have to look from one side to another to see the whole thing (the fire on one side, the beam on the opposite side). Focusing one of them would leave more options, such as smudging / airbrushing around the focal point... whichever technique you're good with.
Color balance and use of particles are good. Keep them coming.