Obsidian Fire
Ahk Morn!
- AKA
- The Engineer
O_O We have a fan creations forum? Why did I not notice this before?
Anyway, here is my fanfiction.net profile --->http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2001529/Obsidian_Fire
My main FFVII story is The Shadow Level. This is an AU suspense story that went AU a long time before the Compilation starts. Instead of starting it at the point it goes AU, I decided to start it midway through Crisis Core at the point it goes AU for Zack which is in Chapter 4 during the Genesis attack. Until this point, the AU hasn't affected Zack at all. Expect quite a bit of OOC at first until some background has been flushed out. Pairings are ZackxAerith and CloudxTifa.
Affects of the AU include a Turk Cloud who uses a gun and might know something about Jenova, an Aerith who is perfectly fine with the Turks hanging around the church and who knows Zack's PHS number even when he didn't get the chance to give it to her, and a Turk Departmet that hates the Science Departmet (something about a Turk being experimented on, and not being MIA) and would not mind it if Genesis succeeded in killing certain scientists.
Here is the prologue. The rest of the chapters are much longer and have more notes; I won't be posting them here. (For that matter, are we allowed to post the actual FanFiction here or just the links? If we're not, I'll take the next part out.)
The Shadow Level
Prologue
The Newest Turk
Finally, Zack thought as he entered Sector 8. It had been a long night and Zack was tired. Being told your mentor was going to be assassinated was bad enough; having to fight off an attack most likely caused by your mentor was even worse.
Unfortunately for him, there were Genesis-copies in the plaza he just entered. They were heading towards a guy who looked a couple of years younger than Zack. Zack ran across the plaza and started to draw his sword only to have an EMR block his path. He skidded to a stop and looked over to see Reno blocking his way.
Reno removed his EMR from Zack's path and smirked. "Sector 8 is the Turk's turf," he said, as if it explained everything.
Zack turned around to see where the guy was, only to find himself surrounded by Rude and Tseng. "You've got to be kidding me." He knew Turks were heartless, but still... "Tseng, do something."
Rude pushed his sunglasses further up his nose and smiled at Zack. "There's no reason to worry about the kid."
"But-" Zack turned just in time to see the guy turn around and shoot both Genesis-copies in the heart. He had never seen anyone shoot a gun that fast. "Wow," he said.
"Indeed," Tseng said before he turned to Reno and Rude. "How are the other areas?" he asked them.
Reno snorted. "Monsters are crawling all over Midgar."
"And even SOLDIERs are having difficulties," Rude finished for him and glanced at Zack.
Tseng nodded in understanding. "Take care of it." The two Turks nodded and ran off.
"So," Zack looked at Tseng, "even Turks are on the job?"
"SOLDIER's being stingy with it's manpower, that's why," an unfamiliar voice answered.
"Come on, we're pretty short handed right now." Zack stopped when he realized it was not Tseng he was talking to. He looked to his side and realized it was the guy who had shot the Genesis-copies. The boy had very spiky long blond hair tied back in a low ponytail and pale skin. A pair of sleek sunglasses prevented Zack from seeing his eyes. He wore jeans, gloves, and a black leather trench coat . Zack could see no sign of a gun anywhere on him. What struck Zack the most about him was his age; he looked at least two years younger then Zack was.
Zack ran how Reno and Rude had acted through his head as well as the kid's skill with a gun and it finally hit him. "Wait, you're a Turk too?" He looked at the kid in amazement.
The kid nodded. "Yep. The name's Cloud."
"I'm SOLDIER's Zack." He held out a hand and they shook. "Hey, how old are you?" he asked.
Before Cloud could answer, Tseng interrupted. "Zack, aren't you in the middle of a mission?" Cloud snorted.
Zack's mind raced. "Come on Tseng, our goals are the same. Can I help around here?"
The Turk shook his head. "Thanks, but no than-"
"Oh, he can help," Cloud interrupted. "That is if he can reach the copies before I do." He took his gun out of his coat and flipped it through the air before catching it and turned away. "Tseng. Zack. See you later. Oh Zack," he turned and looked back at the SOLDIER. "If you really want to know, I turn fifteen in August. See you round." He walked away down the street.
Zack stared at his retreating back and turned to Tseng. "He's young, isn't he?"
Tseng nodded. "Yes, but we haven't seen anyone with his skill with a gun come through the Turks in decades. Now go."
Zack nodded and ran off.
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Fortunately, the next couple of monsters Zack ran into were just mecha; a few sword swipes here and the use of a Bolt materia there sliced through them with ease. The problem started when he almost crashed into another Genesis-copy. It looked a lot more like Genesis did than any other copy he had come across and it was clearly at a higher level than the rest. It was also heavily bleeding from bullet wounds. The most surprising thing about it was the large black wing jutting out from its left shoulder.
Right when the copy was about to fly off, Zack slashed at it and succeeded in knocking it out. He stared in awe at the wing. Footsteps approached him and Zack looked up to see Cloud.
Cloud looked down at the copy and then looked at Zack. "To me, wings always symbolized freedom. To be able fly away and leave my past behind..." He looked off in the distance. "I wanted them until I learned your past never really leaves you."
Zack stared at him. How can he think that when Genesis and Angeal have thrown everything they had away? "You should know that humans with wings are monsters; we just fought a monster." He pointed at the Genesis-copy and shook his head in disbelief.
Cloud stiffened. "You're wrong," he said with conviction.
His denial startled Zack. "What do you mean?"
Cloud gave Zack a piercing glare through his sunglasses and said, "I would think you of all people would know that being a monster has everything to do with actions and nothing to do with appearances." He gave Zack one final nod and walked off, leaving silence in his wake.
Zack stared at his retreating back until his phone rang. After answering it, he began racing to the Sector 5 Reactor. Angeal, I hope we don't have to kill you, he thought.
End Chapter
Hope you liked it! The actual Chapter 1 can be found here ---> http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6103038/2/The_Shadow_Level
Anyway, here is my fanfiction.net profile --->http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2001529/Obsidian_Fire
My main FFVII story is The Shadow Level. This is an AU suspense story that went AU a long time before the Compilation starts. Instead of starting it at the point it goes AU, I decided to start it midway through Crisis Core at the point it goes AU for Zack which is in Chapter 4 during the Genesis attack. Until this point, the AU hasn't affected Zack at all. Expect quite a bit of OOC at first until some background has been flushed out. Pairings are ZackxAerith and CloudxTifa.
Affects of the AU include a Turk Cloud who uses a gun and might know something about Jenova, an Aerith who is perfectly fine with the Turks hanging around the church and who knows Zack's PHS number even when he didn't get the chance to give it to her, and a Turk Departmet that hates the Science Departmet (something about a Turk being experimented on, and not being MIA) and would not mind it if Genesis succeeded in killing certain scientists.
Here is the prologue. The rest of the chapters are much longer and have more notes; I won't be posting them here. (For that matter, are we allowed to post the actual FanFiction here or just the links? If we're not, I'll take the next part out.)
The Shadow Level
Prologue
The Newest Turk
Finally, Zack thought as he entered Sector 8. It had been a long night and Zack was tired. Being told your mentor was going to be assassinated was bad enough; having to fight off an attack most likely caused by your mentor was even worse.
Unfortunately for him, there were Genesis-copies in the plaza he just entered. They were heading towards a guy who looked a couple of years younger than Zack. Zack ran across the plaza and started to draw his sword only to have an EMR block his path. He skidded to a stop and looked over to see Reno blocking his way.
Reno removed his EMR from Zack's path and smirked. "Sector 8 is the Turk's turf," he said, as if it explained everything.
Zack turned around to see where the guy was, only to find himself surrounded by Rude and Tseng. "You've got to be kidding me." He knew Turks were heartless, but still... "Tseng, do something."
Rude pushed his sunglasses further up his nose and smiled at Zack. "There's no reason to worry about the kid."
"But-" Zack turned just in time to see the guy turn around and shoot both Genesis-copies in the heart. He had never seen anyone shoot a gun that fast. "Wow," he said.
"Indeed," Tseng said before he turned to Reno and Rude. "How are the other areas?" he asked them.
Reno snorted. "Monsters are crawling all over Midgar."
"And even SOLDIERs are having difficulties," Rude finished for him and glanced at Zack.
Tseng nodded in understanding. "Take care of it." The two Turks nodded and ran off.
"So," Zack looked at Tseng, "even Turks are on the job?"
"SOLDIER's being stingy with it's manpower, that's why," an unfamiliar voice answered.
"Come on, we're pretty short handed right now." Zack stopped when he realized it was not Tseng he was talking to. He looked to his side and realized it was the guy who had shot the Genesis-copies. The boy had very spiky long blond hair tied back in a low ponytail and pale skin. A pair of sleek sunglasses prevented Zack from seeing his eyes. He wore jeans, gloves, and a black leather trench coat . Zack could see no sign of a gun anywhere on him. What struck Zack the most about him was his age; he looked at least two years younger then Zack was.
Zack ran how Reno and Rude had acted through his head as well as the kid's skill with a gun and it finally hit him. "Wait, you're a Turk too?" He looked at the kid in amazement.
The kid nodded. "Yep. The name's Cloud."
"I'm SOLDIER's Zack." He held out a hand and they shook. "Hey, how old are you?" he asked.
Before Cloud could answer, Tseng interrupted. "Zack, aren't you in the middle of a mission?" Cloud snorted.
Zack's mind raced. "Come on Tseng, our goals are the same. Can I help around here?"
The Turk shook his head. "Thanks, but no than-"
"Oh, he can help," Cloud interrupted. "That is if he can reach the copies before I do." He took his gun out of his coat and flipped it through the air before catching it and turned away. "Tseng. Zack. See you later. Oh Zack," he turned and looked back at the SOLDIER. "If you really want to know, I turn fifteen in August. See you round." He walked away down the street.
Zack stared at his retreating back and turned to Tseng. "He's young, isn't he?"
Tseng nodded. "Yes, but we haven't seen anyone with his skill with a gun come through the Turks in decades. Now go."
Zack nodded and ran off.
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Fortunately, the next couple of monsters Zack ran into were just mecha; a few sword swipes here and the use of a Bolt materia there sliced through them with ease. The problem started when he almost crashed into another Genesis-copy. It looked a lot more like Genesis did than any other copy he had come across and it was clearly at a higher level than the rest. It was also heavily bleeding from bullet wounds. The most surprising thing about it was the large black wing jutting out from its left shoulder.
Right when the copy was about to fly off, Zack slashed at it and succeeded in knocking it out. He stared in awe at the wing. Footsteps approached him and Zack looked up to see Cloud.
Cloud looked down at the copy and then looked at Zack. "To me, wings always symbolized freedom. To be able fly away and leave my past behind..." He looked off in the distance. "I wanted them until I learned your past never really leaves you."
Zack stared at him. How can he think that when Genesis and Angeal have thrown everything they had away? "You should know that humans with wings are monsters; we just fought a monster." He pointed at the Genesis-copy and shook his head in disbelief.
Cloud stiffened. "You're wrong," he said with conviction.
His denial startled Zack. "What do you mean?"
Cloud gave Zack a piercing glare through his sunglasses and said, "I would think you of all people would know that being a monster has everything to do with actions and nothing to do with appearances." He gave Zack one final nod and walked off, leaving silence in his wake.
Zack stared at his retreating back until his phone rang. After answering it, he began racing to the Sector 5 Reactor. Angeal, I hope we don't have to kill you, he thought.
End Chapter
Hope you liked it! The actual Chapter 1 can be found here ---> http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6103038/2/The_Shadow_Level
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