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Miscreant

FoolISH
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Pinkfish, Fish
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May do more..
 
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cmXT

C00kay Munchsta
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cmXT
This is lovely :D

The gradients and colours really go well, and the shapes and damn nice.
The only problem I can notice is some of the 'jagged' flow, like to he left the cross over point messes the flow up and makes it split sort of =/
 

tangerine

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Val
Very slick, but it would look better without the text and the bar killing the flow on the right side imo. The one on the left side works well.
 
The colors and shapes all work well together. Only thing I'm not quite sure of is the framing sort of effect the two sides give it, especially with the yellow block on the left, but the composition is well done; plus, I don't think one side would work without the other - it'd throw off the balance.
 

Miscreant

FoolISH
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Pinkfish, Fish
Thanks for the comments right here are some variations, more or less tentical things? I'm thinking less but I feel the need for a second, third or maybe even fourth opinion.
Variation with the yellow block, purple bar or plain as well.
thank you :)

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tangerine

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Val
This one is my preference simply because it flows better. I feel like the yellow bar is somewhat distracting now that I see it without the right bar. In any case, the tag is ace.
 
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