A Preview to a New Race

Tennyo

Higher Further Faster
OMG GO READ IT PEOPLE AND TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!!!

Also I need someone to let Emma out. Short of a really lame Deus Ex Machina she has no way to get out of her pod.

Or maybe she did but I missed the moment. I don't know. But it ties into the one army dude saying that my person hadn't gotten out yet. She hasn't because she can't. :awesome:
 

Tennyo

Higher Further Faster
Well I figured that not everyone could bust out in full-on massacre mode. :wacky:

So anyone want to go let Emma out?

Also as you can tell I didn't kill my own scientist off. What will Dr. Thomas do next? What ever happened to Natasha? Oooooo the suspense!

Maybe Noen could use them, or not, up to you. Just nobody kill them please please please!!! D:

At least not for a while yet. :awesome:
 

Shadow Rogue

Pro Adventurer
AKA
If you see me you'd know.
I could tonight. I'm stuck staying up. >.> but then, what of the other member in our party?
 

Tennyo

Higher Further Faster
Maybe let them come on and read and discuss a bit. I do know that J5 (lol) had said that she had a story idea concerning the two of us. I don't know if it's too late for it now or not, though. We'll see.
 

Channy

Bad Habit
AKA
Ruby Rose, Lucy
Shadow since you just posted, I think you should wait a bit for others.

Everyone else in their round of posts will probly acknowledge her cry for help and telecommunicate with one another all "Who's closest? Who can do it?" And then it'll end up being you or Jenova's fifth, or both. :monster:
 

Tennyo

Higher Further Faster
Wait can our characters all communicate this way? Have they always been able to? Or is this a new thing for them?
 
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NoenGaruth

That Guy With The Midgar Model
AKA
NoenGaruth, Stolz, Blitzwing, Ryoko Asakura, Judge Magister Gabranth, Col. Hans Landa, Itsuki Koizumi, Treize Khushrenada
Well I figured that not everyone could bust out in full-on massacre mode. :wacky:

So anyone want to go let Emma out?

Also as you can tell I didn't kill my own scientist off. What will Dr. Thomas do next? What ever happened to Natasha? Oooooo the suspense!

Maybe Noen could use them, or not, up to you. Just nobody kill them please please please!!! D:

At least not for a while yet. :awesome:

Hmm I rekon I could use Dr. Thomas in my next one, he can voice his thoughts at the board meeting and Vargas will express his dissapointment he wasn't slaughtered along with the rest of the scientists. :lol:

As for Natasha, perhapse her whereabouts should just be a mystery to the rest of Viola (I might make mention of her if Circe or whoever is going over reports) but I'll leave her fate up to you since she's important to your character.

oh and btw very awesome first post! I like how yours had the failed escape shown as a sort of prologue.
 

Channy

Bad Habit
AKA
Ruby Rose, Lucy
Well everyone can telecommunicate, that's always been a plot device... but depending on the location of each character, the strength of the communication will be in play... So like, with Sierra, Emma's connection with her will be hazy and kind of broken, because they're on near opposite sides of the building floor. Her connection with Eydin would be much stronger, as well as Idris.

Also, judging from the ambiguity of those three posts, to me it sounds like Idris sensed/found Eydin, and then together the two of them will free Emma... Yes? Or am I off?
 

Tennyo

Higher Further Faster
@ Noen: Thank you, thank you. ^_^ I really wanted to put an emphasis on Natasha and Emma's relationship and the fact that Natasha had turned against the project over time. Also, since she was caught I figured that someone in Viola has to know where she is. I mean, I tried to make it obvious that the "being switched to another project" wasn't entirely true. She had to be punished somehow. I've got an idea or two for her but nothing that's really any good for the moment.

Also when you use Dr. Thomas make sure to try to make him very formal and businesslike, and also never let him refer to Emma by name unless asked to. He thinks that staff should not be on a first name basis with the specimens and so he just calles her 008 because that's what's proper.

@ Channy: Oh I guess I misunderstood that. I kind of made it seem like Emma didn't know about this power. lol Oh well it isn't too big a part of my post. Maybe I could change it later, or maybe it's fine as is. Either what what you suggested about Idris and Eydin sounds just fine. :)

And with that I'm off to bed. Nighty night peeps.
 

Channy

Bad Habit
AKA
Ruby Rose, Lucy
I think it's fine as it is, and I can incorporate it nicely into my next post as Sierra just hears her name called, but doesn't know who/where it's coming from.
 

NoenGaruth

That Guy With The Midgar Model
AKA
NoenGaruth, Stolz, Blitzwing, Ryoko Asakura, Judge Magister Gabranth, Col. Hans Landa, Itsuki Koizumi, Treize Khushrenada
Also when you use Dr. Thomas make sure to try to make him very formal and businesslike, and also never let him refer to Emma by name unless asked to. He thinks that staff should not be on a first name basis with the specimens and so he just calles her 008 because that's what's proper.

Gotcha, I'll make sure he's like that.
 

Tennyo

Higher Further Faster
Also his research is the most important thing to him in his entire life. He will fight tooth and nail to preserve it, and isn't afraid to fight dirty. lol
 

Bex

fresh to death
AKA
Bex
O Tennyo that is a good post. Nice concept, I enjoy how Emma actually feels life-force and also the pain that comes with the death of others. It's pretty creative, I like it.
Also enjoying use of first person, it's always smashing.

So well done, great first RP post.
 

Baldy

000 - 000 - 009
AKA
Sienna, Jenovas-Fifth, Idris
Ten', I had an ending concerning Emma, yes, but it also concerned her getting out by her lonesome. XDD So I suppose it's a good thing I changed it.

Well everyone can telecommunicate, that's always been a plot device... but depending on the location of each character, the strength of the communication will be in play... So like, with Sierra, Emma's connection with her will be hazy and kind of broken, because they're on near opposite sides of the building floor. Her connection with Eydin would be much stronger, as well as Idris.

Also, judging from the ambiguity of those three posts, to me it sounds like Idris sensed/found Eydin, and then together the two of them will free Emma... Yes? Or am I off?

Well Idris can't've found Emma if she's locked up, still. So it sounds like a plan to me, if Shadow's in for it. :) And hguilsgilfudhil ambiguity was needed due to godmodding. XD

I could tonight. I'm stuck staying up. >.> but then, what of the other member in our party?

That's right, where's our lovely QoS?
 

Channy

Bad Habit
AKA
Ruby Rose, Lucy
So I finally read the last two posts and I loved em. I agree with everything Bex said, the feeling of pain, the abandonment, the first person. It's lovely. :3

Well Idris can't've found Emma if she's locked up, still. So it sounds like a plan to me, if Shadow's in for it. :) And hguilsgilfudhil ambiguity was needed due to godmodding. XD

That's right, where's our lovely QoS?

Idris and Eydin will then meet up, and free Emma together. :3 gogo

I think she ditched?
 

Alessa Gillespie

a letter to my future self
AKA
Sansa Stark, Sweet Bro, Feferi, tentacleTherapist, Nin, Aki, Catwoman, Shinjiro Aragaki, Terezi, Princess Bubblegum
I badly need to make my third post, probably. Terra needs to meet up with Sierra and Ethyris.
 

Channy

Bad Habit
AKA
Ruby Rose, Lucy
BUT OUR SEXUAL TENSION D;

Oh all right :monster:

After seeing Tenny's post I badly want to post again >.>

So I've deciding that we won't have a set rotation anymore, because some people are simply slower than others. So as long as the people in your group have posted, as well as an additional two others (which makes for a total of at least have the players) you can go ahead and post again.

This will help keep it rolling smoothly, and nobody will be waiting on one person.
 

Alessa Gillespie

a letter to my future self
AKA
Sansa Stark, Sweet Bro, Feferi, tentacleTherapist, Nin, Aki, Catwoman, Shinjiro Aragaki, Terezi, Princess Bubblegum
BAWWWW SEXUAL TENSION

needs more crazy ppl imo. :awesome:
 

Channy

Bad Habit
AKA
Ruby Rose, Lucy
NO U BAWWWW D;<

Also, I feel that I need to point out BEX IS GAWD SHE DREW ME SIERRA OMFG AWESOMESAUCE

Sierra-1.jpg


I love her <3
 

Tennyo

Higher Further Faster
O Tennyo that is a good post. Nice concept, I enjoy how Emma actually feels life-force and also the pain that comes with the death of others. It's pretty creative, I like it.
Also enjoying use of first person, it's always smashing.

So well done, great first RP post.

Aww thanks! I'm so glad everyone liked it! ^_^

Idris and Eydin will then meet up, and free Emma together. :3 gogo

I think she ditched?

Yes yes yes! Sounds like a plan to me! ^_^

Also glad to have inspired you. :monster:
 

Alessa Gillespie

a letter to my future self
AKA
Sansa Stark, Sweet Bro, Feferi, tentacleTherapist, Nin, Aki, Catwoman, Shinjiro Aragaki, Terezi, Princess Bubblegum
It's purty. But she clearly has not been getting enough sleep. :monster:
 
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