Woa, that was some intense writing there Jen, great way to kick off the new season!
Only thing I'm confused with is the setting, is she meant to be in the government's capitol or Vargas' city? The description sounds like the capitol tho there was mention in there about machines not functioning as weapons cause Vargas hadn't found any destrillians. Just noting that Vargas has no real influence in the capitol (he's also given up on the dessies due to lack of sightings), that's all the government and it's military.
Thanks a lot, and to everyone else who loved it/came/etc.
As for where in the world she is, see, I tried to make it as ambiguous as I could - mainly because I didn't REALLY want to sift through seven pages of discussion as to what city did what and where and who and hsdgljksdfhgldsfg. I just wanted to write. XD
So I'll probably make a tweak or two to the place, but for now, yes, it's the capitol, because it's the government's capitol and they're the ones trying to grab the Dessies. I'll just up and get rid of the Vargas mention, seeing as he's completely given up on them.
Otherwise, it's go time guys!!