Destrillians Thread of Ideas, Planning and Former Secrets

Baldy

000 - 000 - 009
AKA
Sienna, Jenovas-Fifth, Idris
Seeing as this thing hasn't had an update in a while I'm gonna add the second installment of my little religionthing, to be referenced throughout the Dessies world.

In the beginning, there was Oe, or “Nothing.” Oe was an ageless thing, terribly old—and terribly lonely. One day, the grief of eternity alone became too much, and he threw all his sadness and pain into one being and turned it into light, and created Lai, “the Beginning.” Lai was beautiful and wise, and the two of them loved each other to unfathomable depths and spent a timeless time together.
Eventually, though, Lai could feel all the life in her bursting to be free of her body. She and Oe had grown lonely once more, even despite each other’s company, but Oe could not create any more life. He had only had enough power for one.
But Lai was full of the life of everything, and she knew it had to be set free. Despite Oe’s pleas to find another way, she exploded and created a thousand stars a thousand times, and a thousand times again. Every star a son or daughter.
Oe desperately tried to save her, but the only thing he could salvage from her body was the first letter of her name, which he took for his own and became Loe, or “the Beginning of Nothing,” or “the End.”

All life is made up of the spirit of Lai. She gave herself so that the world and all that lies beyond the world could be. She resides in every tree trunk, every raindrop, every flame and star and heart. When a thing dies, Loe takes its lifeforce and puts it in “the waiting world,” a paradisiacal land left somewhere deep in unexplored skies by Lai’s exploded body. There the lifeforce lives in bliss until all life in the universe has extinguished, whereupon it will all reunite into Lai. Loe will give the first letter of her name back and become Oe once more, and they will live happily in the paradise of her old, ruined body.

One star, Shale, shone brighter and more beautifully than all the rest. She reminded Loe the most of Lai, and so he placed her in the middle of all her brothers and sisters so he could admire her. But the others grew jealous of Shale and tried to kill her.
To protect her, Loe formed a hard shell of rock and earth around her, where she lived within the hollow center, turned into the form of a woman.
This shell of rock and earth was the planet.

(This was mentioned here.)

Only one being, Clay, who loved Shale, felt strongly enough for her tragedy to try to aid her. He coaxed Shale into coming out from the center of the planet: he said he would sacrifice his freedom, become “planet-bound” and live in the form of a man if she would live on the surface with him. She agreed, but was reluctant to come out of hiding, so Clay asked his closest brothers, Glinnh and Allix, to protect the planet from the rest of their brethren. The two agreed, but on the condition that they could leave and come back at regular intervals. They became the planet’s moons. (And sometimes they get lazy or forget to come back on time, and this is why sometimes there is only one moon in the night sky, or no moon at all.)
Clay himself vowed to protect the planet during the other half of the time that his brothers would not, and he became the planet’s sun. In the day time, he would fly across the sky, warming the planet and keeping it safe—at night, though, he would land on the ground in human form and be together with Shale.

The planet was bountiful and beautiful, and as the centuries passed, some of the brothers and sisters of the two “planet-bound” began to feel guilty and remorseful for their actions, and envious of the beauty the two were able to enjoy. They pleaded forgiveness and Shale and Clay, being forgiving people, accepted them and let them walk on the planet’s surface. The stars, delighted, shone so bright that their reflections burned in the glass-flat oceans, and out of each reflection, the star’s spirit rose. These spirits became the plants and the animals during the daytime, but Loe, who could not bear to be alone without Lai again, told them that they could only stay on the planet for so long. So, every night at dusk, some of the spirits return to the skies, and some come down from above – then, at dawn, they switch again.

MEANWHILE.

There is a really life-changingly serious question that needs to be answered here: who is going to die in or at the end of S2? We need MAIN CHARACTERS to kick the bucket, not just a bunch of secondaries - people we care about. It's a tough decision.
We don't need plenty - two or three would be fantastic. I've got ideas as to who would be good choices and so do a few others, but we need to get all the ideas out there in reference to who and when and why, and of course, to have the characters' owners agree.
Give it thought, and fire away.
 

Mantichorus

"I've seen enough."
AKA
Kris; Mantichorus; Sam Vimes; Neku Sakuraba; Koki Kariya; Hazama; CuChulainn; Yu Narukami; Mewtwo; Rival Silver; Suicune; Kanata; Professor Oak; The Brigadier; VIII; The Engineer
Whoa. Great myth. :D

As to who dies... well, it's been no secret that I plan on killing off Early. This is gonna be at the end of S2, maybe beginning of S3. I'm also planning to wipe out Malice (the little Artolian town that Early met with retired Volsung scientist Dr. Mateus Smythe) with Thanatos.

I'm willing to listen to - but not necessarily follow :P - any other suggestions.
 

Hisako

消えないひさ&#
AKA
Satsu, BRIAN BLESSED, MIGHTY AND WISE Junpei Iori: Ace Detective, Maccaffrickstonson von Lichtenstafford Frabenschnaben, Polite Krogan, Robert Baratheon
I'm all for it, but "we need"?

I wasn't aware of the need to kill off main characters. I thought it'd just be something everyone did naturally. :monster:
 

Bex

fresh to death
AKA
Bex
thetis dies at the end of season 3. she's lived too long already.
 

Alessa Gillespie

a letter to my future self
AKA
Sansa Stark, Sweet Bro, Feferi, tentacleTherapist, Nin, Aki, Catwoman, Shinjiro Aragaki, Terezi, Princess Bubblegum
elvan dies at the end of s2
 

Joe

I KEEP MY IDEALS
AKA
Joe, Arcana
The tone of S2 is barely dark, 'back up against the wall' when there is pretty much ZERO consequence for anything.

The Destrillians aren't in a horrible situation where they have no real options and are them against the world, at the current stage. They are moving from place to place, cracking jokes and getting up to stuff.

Oh noes Terra was captured! Oh good she is saved.
Oh noes Fiona is sick! Oh good she is saved.
Oh noes the military are chasing us! Oh good we escaped.

Rinse and repeat. Seriously there are no dark tones and the story can barely be taken seriously. Somebody shouldn't HAVE to die to reinfoce that in a story, but ours has gone on this long consequence-free and it really seems like a gang and their wacky adventure rather than it being a believable story depicting struggle among other things.

I have no qualms with Lokka dying to make enough of an impact on not only the other characters, but also the writers. If anyone else can offer alternatives that would make quite an actual impact on the story and reinforce consequence, then go for it. Otherwise I am gonna expand on this idea.
 

Bex

fresh to death
AKA
Bex
idk, we're at the early stages of the story yet.
stuff in a tragedy doesn't usually get srs or dark or set into motion until act 3 of 5 acts
 

Tennyo

Higher Further Faster
thetis dies at the end of season 3. she's lived too long already.

Not going to lie this made my heart sink.

Noooo not Thetis... :(

The tone of S2 is barely dark, 'back up against the wall' when there is pretty much ZERO consequence for anything.

The Destrillians aren't in a horrible situation where they have no real options and are them against the world, at the current stage. They are moving from place to place, cracking jokes and getting up to stuff.

Oh noes Terra was captured! Oh good she is saved.
Oh noes Fiona is sick! Oh good she is saved.
Oh noes the military are chasing us! Oh good we escaped.

Rinse and repeat. Seriously there are no dark tones and the story can barely be taken seriously. Somebody shouldn't HAVE to die to reinfoce that in a story, but ours has gone on this long consequence-free and it really seems like a gang and their wacky adventure rather than it being a believable story depicting struggle among other things.

I have no qualms with Lokka dying to make enough of an impact on not only the other characters, but also the writers. If anyone else can offer alternatives that would make quite an actual impact on the story and reinforce consequence, then go for it. Otherwise I am gonna expand on this idea.

I've been toying with the idea of
letting Riese bite it when Osea goes insane/poof.

But she's not quite important enough. :/
 

Joe

I KEEP MY IDEALS
AKA
Joe, Arcana
idk, we're at the early stages of the story yet.
stuff in a tragedy doesn't usually get srs or dark or set into motion until act 3 of 5 acts
Dessies isn't a tragedy. It's a believable story with serious tones. Whether it ends in tragedy or not is another thing, but we haven't done a fantastic job at either believable or serious in some areas.
 

Joker

We have come to terms
AKA
Godot
Yes, but we also shouldn't be using that to force or coerce people into killing their characters, either. "It's not dark enough" seems like a bad reason, imo - it's just as bad to arbitrarily force elements to the story to say that they are there as it is to not have them to begin with.

If that makes sense.

That said, I'm not sure which of my characters is going to die in the big confrontation, but one will, and the other will survive. Both will make it to s3, however.
 

NoenGaruth

That Guy With The Midgar Model
AKA
NoenGaruth, Stolz, Blitzwing, Ryoko Asakura, Judge Magister Gabranth, Col. Hans Landa, Itsuki Koizumi, Treize Khushrenada
If it helps, of my large list of characters, about 90 percent of them will be dead before reaching the end of S3 (not counting the epilogue)
 

Baldy

000 - 000 - 009
AKA
Sienna, Jenovas-Fifth, Idris
EVERYONE dies in the Epilogue.

How's that for dark. :monster:

Keen, I agree wholeheartedly with what you're saying - it wouldn't help if we just forced a death in there to be more serious. I think a better way of saying what I said before, then, would be that one or two major, main character deaths in S2 would really drive home the point, and that it's a thing people should think about: if they can see their character's death as something that would work and be natural, and not like... take away their hopes and dreams for S3.

It's not that things need to be darker, it's that so far the Destrillians have been pretty much untouchable as far as the present opposition goes, and if that continues all the way through to S3 then people will stop feeling for the situation. Not necessarily for the characters, because there's more going on than plot - there's the subtle emotional developments and things - but they need to be in a situation where it is possible for them to get seriously hurt and to die, and that needs to be made very, very clear. Otherwise, so what if so and so is kidnapped, or so and so is fighting this guy over here?
Make more sense?
 

Super Mario

IT'S A ME!
AKA
Jesse McCree. I feel like a New Man
All I'm sacrificing is
Zao
but it's going to be at S3. AND I'm cleaning a majority of my closet in S2 slowly.
 
AKA
L, Castiel, Scotty Mc Dickerson
How's this for making the series dark.
S3 starts and the truth comes out that Fiona is straight!
 

Super Mario

IT'S A ME!
AKA
Jesse McCree. I feel like a New Man
I believe it is not death that is truly the means and tools to make the series dark but the fact that if they get through tough shit and all their loved ones die around em? Now that shit's kinda darker, well at least that's what I feel. I feel we should make the themes alot more darker (I promise you, I will use my efforts to make mine as dark too) but leave a sliver of hope for em. I ain't drowning my kids maaan. Until the time is right that is :monster:


That is just my two cents, don't be hatin' team.
 

Joker

We have come to terms
AKA
Godot
Well, I mean...

Thetis ALMOST drowns in a bit.

...sort of.

(if you ignore the fact that she can't drown ever)
 
AKA
L, Castiel, Scotty Mc Dickerson
Other than every single scene consisting of MDK I think each Dessie character really needs to think of the worst case scenario that would occur against them.

* Finding family then having them slaughtered?
* Abuse both physical and psychological
* Torture

etc etc etc.
In all fairness I can't see killing off the main characters is a great idea just to lower the tone of the series :-/
 

Alessa Gillespie

a letter to my future self
AKA
Sansa Stark, Sweet Bro, Feferi, tentacleTherapist, Nin, Aki, Catwoman, Shinjiro Aragaki, Terezi, Princess Bubblegum
* Abuse both physical and psychological
* Torture
so what you're saying is

make salerra canon?
 

Joker

We have come to terms
AKA
Godot
* Finding family then having them slaughtered?
* Abuse both physical and psychological
* Torture
so wait everything becomes a Telran-themed OVA?


btw spoilers he's totally gonna waste the entire Niresti contingent of Damascus
 

Joe

I KEEP MY IDEALS
AKA
Joe, Arcana
I believe it is not death that is truly the means and tools to make the series dark but the fact that if they get through tough shit and all their loved ones die around em? Now that shit's kinda darker
Aside from Kram and Emma, the dessies' loved ones at the very most if you push it a bit, consist of the other dessies. Point still stands.
 

Alex

alex is dead
AKA
Alex, Ashes, Pennywise, Bill Weasley, Jack's Smirking Revenge, Sterling Archer
Okay, so. Here is where we put the revised ideas about what happened in the first season of Dessies forward to everyone. We’ve been deliberately ambiguous about how things ended in season one because of the extent of things that needed to be changed with Channy leaving the project and the massive amount of new information we’ve come up with for the RP.

What we’ve come up with, as the framework for what ‘really’ happened when the Destrillians escaped Viola in season 1 went like this:

Destrillian #005, William Ashford was a generally unpleasant kind of guy. Destrillian of darkness, capable of not only creating hard-dark constructs but also spreading fear, hatred and irrational panic through a limited control over other peoples irrational fear of the dark. During some routine testing, it became apparent that Will had a greater resistance to the negative effects of Derinium than any of the other Dessies at the facility.

After this was discovered, he was put forward for a special testing procedure, one which saw Viola inject him with the super chemical found within Lyverius which give them access to their extreme power. This did not end well. Will quickly let the power go to his head and proceeded to tear through Viola Inc. Like it was cardboard, accidently severing the power that led to the Dessies being freed from captivity.

They make their escape, as was originally planned, and along the way they’re forced to kill Will before escaping into the big wide world and going their separate ways.

If you guys have any thoughts or ideas, then feel free to lob them in. This is all very bare bones stuff right now :)
 

Hisako

消えないひさ&#
AKA
Satsu, BRIAN BLESSED, MIGHTY AND WISE Junpei Iori: Ace Detective, Maccaffrickstonson von Lichtenstafford Frabenschnaben, Polite Krogan, Robert Baratheon
Man my memory sucks, but did we have an original Destrillian of darkness? :monster:
 

Alex

alex is dead
AKA
Alex, Ashes, Pennywise, Bill Weasley, Jack's Smirking Revenge, Sterling Archer
Man my memory sucks, but did we have an original Destrillian of darkness? :monster:
Yeah, but Dan's not-involvement with Destrillians anymore kind of necessitates this rewrite even moar.

(also Jeff, you should submit colour references for the Wolfe Pack to Sienna so she can finish their chibis :3)
 
Top Bottom