Jairus
Author of FFVII: Lifestream & FFVII: Reflections
Well, here it is! The last chapter of Book One. I went back and did some revisions across the whole story as well. Mostly minor, just tweaking things here and rephrasing things a little there, not enough to greatly change much in most cases but simply to make things flow better. I see writing as being like art, with the page being my canvas and the language, words, phrases, and letters as brushes. Sometimes you've got to do a bit of touching up before you're really happy with a piece, and that's the case with me.
There were sizable portions of a couple chapters that I did greatly change, because I wasn't satisfied with how they had originally turned out. Notably, Chapters 13 and 14, involving the AVALANCHE trio's fate - especially Jessie's. I extended Biggs' and Wedge's last scenes a bit and completely reworked much of Jessie's, though her final end is still the same. But how she gets there is different this time, as is much of her last conversation with Cloud and Tifa.
And I reworked Tifa's thoughts of the trio in Chapter 14 as well. I say all this because those events from Chapter 13 - Jessie's fate, in particular - are mentioned late in this chapter, and if you haven't read the revised version of Chapter 13 first - at least that part of it - it might throw you off a little. But if you've read Chapter 13 since 10/6/19, you'll be fine. Anyway, I hope you all enjoy the conclusion to Book One!
Also, if anyone would be interested in having a single PDF of all of Book One, just let me know and I'll post it in here for everyone to download.
There were sizable portions of a couple chapters that I did greatly change, because I wasn't satisfied with how they had originally turned out. Notably, Chapters 13 and 14, involving the AVALANCHE trio's fate - especially Jessie's. I extended Biggs' and Wedge's last scenes a bit and completely reworked much of Jessie's, though her final end is still the same. But how she gets there is different this time, as is much of her last conversation with Cloud and Tifa.
And I reworked Tifa's thoughts of the trio in Chapter 14 as well. I say all this because those events from Chapter 13 - Jessie's fate, in particular - are mentioned late in this chapter, and if you haven't read the revised version of Chapter 13 first - at least that part of it - it might throw you off a little. But if you've read Chapter 13 since 10/6/19, you'll be fine. Anyway, I hope you all enjoy the conclusion to Book One!
Also, if anyone would be interested in having a single PDF of all of Book One, just let me know and I'll post it in here for everyone to download.
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