My main gripe with the way he's written it is how he focuses on a single perspective for each chapter, and honestly I think it suffers from that. Although I'm fairly open to that narrative structure - a while back I read
The Saga of Seven Suns by Kevin J. Anderson and that used a similar perspective-jumping structure to emphasise how multi-faceted the plot and setting was.
So far, however, in
Game of Thrones and the other books I'm moving onto, it doesn't quite click as readily for me. I'm struggling to figure out why, but I'm sort of pinning it down to the fact that there isn't quite as much mystery going on as the reader than there is in
Seven Suns. In this
Song of Ice and Fire series, the reader is quite omniscient about the whole deal, so there are times where the political intrigue about it doesn't quite have the impact.
It's sort of like, say, a procedural detective mystery show where you have a very strong idea who the killer is from the start. That doesn't mean that I don't like the political intrigue itself - the plot itself is a masterpiece. I just wish Martin kept more of it secret - there's a lot of instances where he gives the reader a plot revelation, and relies on the thrill of the other characters' unknowing for a whole bunch of chapters afterward, but by then the thrill has lost its effect. In
Seven Suns, a lot of resolved plot mysteries open up a whole bunch of new questions because of the element of discovery in sci-fi - in
Game of Thrones, being grounded in politics means that a lot of answers to plot mysteries are fairly linear, and so Martin sort of carries out the plot as a linear sequence of political mysteries waiting to be solved one by one.
On that note, I finished
A Clash of Kings this afternoon. Again, great plot progression, and I love the way the paradigm of the conflict has expanded to Baratheon's brothers, the wildkin beyond the Wall, etc. But because of that singular perspective, every political mystery is being addressed one at a time, and it feels a little slow and linear despite being so complex and overarching, if you know what I mean. It sort of stuck out at the point where Catelyn goes to interrogate Jaime, and it occurred to me that at that point Martin was simply using Jaime as an expository crutch - and even then, the majority of it was simply reaffirming what the reader knew since the middle of the first book, with the main entertainment value being gauging Catelyn's reaction to things revealed to her (most of which were entirely human and predictable in some respects).
It's quite strange, to be honest - it's a series which could very well classify as the cloak-and-dagger mystery series, but because of the way it's written, for me the centrepiece isn't so much the politics itself but the characters who initiate the deeds.