A Preview to a New Race
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Alessa Gillespie
a letter to my future self
- AKA
- Sansa Stark, Sweet Bro, Feferi, tentacleTherapist, Nin, Aki, Catwoman, Shinjiro Aragaki, Terezi, Princess Bubblegum
Okay, I redid the history. It should be pretty different from Bexy's now.
Shadow Rogue
Pro Adventurer
- AKA
- If you see me you'd know.
I haven't forum RPed in a while, but I'll take the wind element, if I may be included... I'll drum up a character later tonight.
Meteo
wolf among the sheep
Excellent changes, your profile is fully approved.
In my RPing experience, "plain and simple" tends to severely stunt a writers creative potential. Here you're encouraged to make full use of your vocabulary and play around with literary devices such as metaphors, similes, etc, to allow your style to stand out among the rest. If anyone has a question about the meaning of a word or sentence from one of your RP posts, they can ask questions in this thread where you can clarify, though I doubt you'll run into many confusing posts, and if so, feel free to inquire; there will always be someone available to offer a helpful explanation.
"Plain and simple" is the reason the Novice RP sub forum was created. RP stories, posts, and profiles therein are designed to be simplistic to allow unexperienced RPers to easily understand and learn the rules and tips to proper RPing.
You're profile is sufficient as it is, but you are fully encouraged to add or change whatever you desire to make it longer and more creative. It's entirely up to you. I try not to be demanding, simply suggestive and instructing. No need to be intimidated. :]
In my RPing experience, "plain and simple" tends to severely stunt a writers creative potential. Here you're encouraged to make full use of your vocabulary and play around with literary devices such as metaphors, similes, etc, to allow your style to stand out among the rest. If anyone has a question about the meaning of a word or sentence from one of your RP posts, they can ask questions in this thread where you can clarify, though I doubt you'll run into many confusing posts, and if so, feel free to inquire; there will always be someone available to offer a helpful explanation.
"Plain and simple" is the reason the Novice RP sub forum was created. RP stories, posts, and profiles therein are designed to be simplistic to allow unexperienced RPers to easily understand and learn the rules and tips to proper RPing.
You're profile is sufficient as it is, but you are fully encouraged to add or change whatever you desire to make it longer and more creative. It's entirely up to you. I try not to be demanding, simply suggestive and instructing. No need to be intimidated. :]
Channy
Bad Habit
- AKA
- Ruby Rose, Lucy
Gtfo, this is my RP, I approve.
PEOPLE, WE ARE MAXED OUT ON WOMEN, WE NEED SOME MEN BEFORE THIS BECOMES A MELON FEST.
Alessa Gillespie
a letter to my future self
- AKA
- Sansa Stark, Sweet Bro, Feferi, tentacleTherapist, Nin, Aki, Catwoman, Shinjiro Aragaki, Terezi, Princess Bubblegum
I THINK SOME PEOPLE WOULD APPROVE A MELON FEST.PEOPLE, WE ARE MAXED OUT ON WOMEN, WE NEED SOME MEN BEFORE THIS BECOMES A MELON FEST.
NoenGaruth
That Guy With The Midgar Model
- AKA
- NoenGaruth, Stolz, Blitzwing, Ryoko Asakura, Judge Magister Gabranth, Col. Hans Landa, Itsuki Koizumi, Treize Khushrenada
You guys wanting an enemy type character? Cause I'm finding this story interesting and would be up for being a Viola executive/department director. (I like the evil-ish type >:3)
Bex
fresh to death
- AKA
- Bex
DO IT DO IT DO IT DO IT!
Would be severely awesome tbh.
QFT /unwarranted self-importance.
If you guys want, I can wait until most people have their bios up, then draw a group shot. Even though I HATE group shots.
Because I'm nice like that.
Hisako
消えないひさ&#
- AKA
- Satsu, BRIAN BLESSED, MIGHTY AND WISE Junpei Iori: Ace Detective, Maccaffrickstonson von Lichtenstafford Frabenschnaben, Polite Krogan, Robert Baratheon
When I first saw this sign-ups thread, the first reaction I had was "this RP needs a fat kid".
Would that idea still stand? =P I don't know why I thought about a fat kid character, it's just that it feels different to all the quasi-Aryans I'm seeing =P (although I do see the reasons behind the demi-godness.)
Would that idea still stand? =P I don't know why I thought about a fat kid character, it's just that it feels different to all the quasi-Aryans I'm seeing =P (although I do see the reasons behind the demi-godness.)
Bex
fresh to death
- AKA
- Bex
I think the reason is they're supposed to be quasi-Aryans! Thus I quote :
No offense, but I can't really see a fat kid being the ultimate killing machine.
Hisako
消えないひさ&#
- AKA
- Satsu, BRIAN BLESSED, MIGHTY AND WISE Junpei Iori: Ace Detective, Maccaffrickstonson von Lichtenstafford Frabenschnaben, Polite Krogan, Robert Baratheon
I did see the reasons behind the demi-godness. =P But I'll drop the fat kid idea. It was just a crazy thought XD When I first saw the elements idea going on I was going to say "HAY GAIZ HOW BOUT HEART? THATS A GOOD ELEMENT" but I'm not going to go that far.
I'll try for a Lightning character, if there isn't an original RPer you're waiting for to take up that spot.
I'll try for a Lightning character, if there isn't an original RPer you're waiting for to take up that spot.
Channy
Bad Habit
- AKA
- Ruby Rose, Lucy
That'd be really awesome dude. Go for it.
I think if you threw in a fat kid, he'd get the shit beaten out of by his own kind.
But Lightning's all yours.
Meteo
wolf among the sheep
That sounds like an excellent idea tbh, it was never even tried in the first Dessie installment, should be fun.
NoenGaruth
That Guy With The Midgar Model
- AKA
- NoenGaruth, Stolz, Blitzwing, Ryoko Asakura, Judge Magister Gabranth, Col. Hans Landa, Itsuki Koizumi, Treize Khushrenada
Alrighty I've whipped up a character profile, hope this is good enough!
(Also suggestion: How bout squeezing in stuff like executive offices and a board room in the Viola building?)
Name: Seth Vargas
Occupation: Head of Viola Weapons and Robotics department.
Gender: Male
Age: 36
Personality: Vargas is a prideful and charismatic man, whose abilities to deceive and manipulate are rivalled by few. His friendly smile and polite attitude are guises that mask his somewhat cruel nature which few actually witness.
His speech pattern is often compared to that of a sales man, allowing him to ‘sell’ his agendas to those around him no matter how questionable they might be. At first glance it might not seem he takes anything seriously, but when a situation calls for his attention he will snap into focus, however his pride in the weapons and machines produced by his department can often lead to arrogance, as he believes anything can be defeated by throwing enough firepower at it - a doctrine that frequently blinds him from seeing alternatives when dealing with situations that aren’t going as he planned.
Despite creating machines that are meant to help better the human race, Vargas really only cares about developing conventional weapons such as firearms or combat drones, and so is distrustful of the Destrillians and all things related to that project, seeing it as an unnecessary risk due to it being centred around using people, who can be unpredictable and cannot be controlled as easily as machines.
Physical appearance: He is a fairly tall man with slender build and a light complexion. He has short black hair with a couple of bangs randomly hanging down to eye level on the sides of his face. He's clean shaven and is constantly wearing aviator sunglasses which hide his hazel brown eyes. His attire is a dark tan single breasted business suit with a black button up shirt and crimson tie. He also sports black lace up shoes and has his company ID hanging from the front left breast pocket of his suit jacket, which underneath conceals an automatic handgun kept in a shoulder holster.
History: Classified. Only known facts are that he’s been with Viola at least as long as the Destrillian project has existed, has no known living relatives, is a skilled marksman, and has always possessed a keen interest in developing instruments of destruction. Those in charge of Project Destrillians are cautious of Vargas's ever watchful eyes suspecting he's merely waiting for them to slip up big enough so that he has an excuse to suede the rest of the executive board in to pulling the plug.
(Also suggestion: How bout squeezing in stuff like executive offices and a board room in the Viola building?)
Name: Seth Vargas
Occupation: Head of Viola Weapons and Robotics department.
Gender: Male
Age: 36
Personality: Vargas is a prideful and charismatic man, whose abilities to deceive and manipulate are rivalled by few. His friendly smile and polite attitude are guises that mask his somewhat cruel nature which few actually witness.
His speech pattern is often compared to that of a sales man, allowing him to ‘sell’ his agendas to those around him no matter how questionable they might be. At first glance it might not seem he takes anything seriously, but when a situation calls for his attention he will snap into focus, however his pride in the weapons and machines produced by his department can often lead to arrogance, as he believes anything can be defeated by throwing enough firepower at it - a doctrine that frequently blinds him from seeing alternatives when dealing with situations that aren’t going as he planned.
Despite creating machines that are meant to help better the human race, Vargas really only cares about developing conventional weapons such as firearms or combat drones, and so is distrustful of the Destrillians and all things related to that project, seeing it as an unnecessary risk due to it being centred around using people, who can be unpredictable and cannot be controlled as easily as machines.
Physical appearance: He is a fairly tall man with slender build and a light complexion. He has short black hair with a couple of bangs randomly hanging down to eye level on the sides of his face. He's clean shaven and is constantly wearing aviator sunglasses which hide his hazel brown eyes. His attire is a dark tan single breasted business suit with a black button up shirt and crimson tie. He also sports black lace up shoes and has his company ID hanging from the front left breast pocket of his suit jacket, which underneath conceals an automatic handgun kept in a shoulder holster.
History: Classified. Only known facts are that he’s been with Viola at least as long as the Destrillian project has existed, has no known living relatives, is a skilled marksman, and has always possessed a keen interest in developing instruments of destruction. Those in charge of Project Destrillians are cautious of Vargas's ever watchful eyes suspecting he's merely waiting for them to slip up big enough so that he has an excuse to suede the rest of the executive board in to pulling the plug.
NoenGaruth
That Guy With The Midgar Model
- AKA
- NoenGaruth, Stolz, Blitzwing, Ryoko Asakura, Judge Magister Gabranth, Col. Hans Landa, Itsuki Koizumi, Treize Khushrenada
Its actualy is more fitting for an enemy character to keep some mystery IMO (E.g Schnizel from code geass or Rufus Shinra don't have too much detail about them or their past cause they're secondary characters). Save that for the main characters as they are the focus.
NoenGaruth
That Guy With The Midgar Model
- AKA
- NoenGaruth, Stolz, Blitzwing, Ryoko Asakura, Judge Magister Gabranth, Col. Hans Landa, Itsuki Koizumi, Treize Khushrenada
Hrmm...well how bout the executive board just has their offices elsewhere at an unseen location? (this wouldnt be suprising cause if anything goes wrong they're safe and sound)