Dacon's Art

[Mantichorus]

I hope I can get my finances sorted soon, so I can commish you to do my Dessies character.

 

[Max Payne]

I hope you can too.

 

[Cookie Monster]

I like the way the feathers turned out. Nice hair color too.

 

[Max Payne]

Next person who commissions something gets a discount, 10 bucks for pencils, and 15 for a colored version

 

[Rumpelstiltskin]

I'll take the $15 offer when i get paid next week broheim

 

[Joe]

I'll take it right now if its up for grabs

 

[Max Payne]

TOO LATE.

 

[Joe]

Fine

 

[Max Payne]

Been faaaaaaaaaaaaaaar too long since an update(mostly because I was wrestling with an assload of insecurities).

but here's a couple of updates, I really needed to work on some anatomy beforehand tho

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[Ⓐaron]

looks good

 

[Hisako]

looks good pretty fuckin' decent practice with a big side-serving of keep up the awesome shit

Fixx'd.

 

[Max Payne]

 

[Rumpelstiltskin]

I couldn't help but think to myself, she has a nice arse in the bottom right frame of your first pic lol.
Loving the dimensions though dude.

 

[Max Payne]

I can't figure out which one to work on.

 

[Joe]

If this is from a game or something then I dont know what its from .

I'd say work on the middle-left image. You can see the female's face here and I'd like to see a facial expression with that stance.

 

[Max Payne]

That would draw too much attention from the executioner, who is the focus of the image.

 

[Madame Mayor]

I like the action going on in the bigger one. Looks awesome.

 

[Max Payne]

tried editing it again ehhhhhh

 

[Max Payne]

DON'T JUST THANK THE POST, I NEED OPINIONS AND INPUT

 

[Madame Mayor]

My opinion is still the same. XP Plus, I'm not an artist so my input for this kind of stuff is usually "it's pretty". But I shall try.

When you said this:

That would draw too much attention from the executioner, who is the focus of the image.

I think you're doing a good job, cause that's where my eyes do go. Well, that and the ass.

 

[Max Payne]

You don't need to be an artist to tell something looks fucked up.

Rob Liefield is proof of this.

 

[Madame Mayor]

That is true, still, I feel like I don't know what I'm talking about when I get asked for my opinion on art.


But no fuck ups I can see.

 

[Max Payne]

I just don't think it looks dynamic enough.

Maybe I'm so worried about it turning out badly that I'm not thinking straight.

 

[crack]

Her butt is kind of big.

And while you can get something off from what the guy's about to do, I can't really tell whether this woman is bracing for impact or if she's being attacked from out of nowhere? Because I can't really tell from the picture.

 

[Max Payne]

She's sorta rushing him, and yeah, I know her butt is big