Hisako
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- Satsu, BRIAN BLESSED, MIGHTY AND WISE Junpei Iori: Ace Detective, Maccaffrickstonson von Lichtenstafford Frabenschnaben, Polite Krogan, Robert Baratheon
So uh grammatical and spelling errors aside, did you end up finding any particularly large plot holes/inconsistencies we need to patch up?
i would have thought that starting the following act with the mystery and intrigue of these random characters who are actually younger versions of current older characters in a flashback was an interesting storytelling structure convention to follow
I'd also like to note, now that I'm home and checked this (), that imo, 241 is a weaker post to START a new act on.
i would have thought that starting the following act with the mystery and intrigue of these random characters who are actually younger versions of current older characters in a flashback was an interesting storytelling structure convention to follow