6:03 "Buying the house at Costa del Sol"
If he is going to make a re-upload, I suggest he edit the voiceover to include the mention that you can rest up in the villa, rather than limiting the mention to a note where he corrects his own voiceover.
7:03 "Bugenhagen worked for Shinra"
The above statement is probably incorrect, though I'm sure
@The Twilight Mexican or
@Strangelove can tell me if my own assessment is correct. I recall them actually raising this point before but I can't find the forum posts.
Here is Cait Sith's line on the Highwind, spoken right before you go to visit Bugenhagen and ask for his advice on how they might stop Meteor.
Cait Sith
“This's just between you 'n' me but…”
“That there Bugenhagen feller, used
to be a pretty handy Shinra worker.”
“Yep, he ain't never bought
no weapons or Mako though……”
JP version
{CAIT SITH}
「ナイショやけども……」
「ブーゲンさんは昔っから神羅の
お得意さんやったんです」
「あ、武器と魔晄は絶対に
買いはらへんかったんですけどね」
This may actually be an error.
DeepL translation:
"It's a secret, but......
Mr. Bugen was a long-time customer of ours.
Oh, he never bought any weapons or anything."
The term used here is 得意, which
according to this online dictionary can mean...
- triumph, prosperity
- pride
- one's strong point, one's forte, one's specialty
- frequent customer (client, etc.)
The translator must have used the third meaning to extrapolate that Bugenhagen was a good "Shinra worker", but you need fewer leaps of the imagination if you simply translate it as "client/customer". Seeing as Bugenhagen never bought any weapons or mako, we can assume that he bought other tech from Shinra instead.
So this actually changes the iceberg so that the title is "Bugenhagen was a Shinra customer" or "Bugenhagen was a Shinra customer, NOT a Shinra worker".
But perhaps most egregious "flaw" is this part.
a fish's paradise: "Cait Sith tells you at some point but I honestly don't remember where"
I don't know if it's a style of iceberg videos, but saying "I couldn't be bothered to look this up" doesn't give a good impression.
9:05 "Fort Condor bad ending"
a fish's paradise: "I assume the bad ending is referring to how if you fail you are forced into a boss fight with the CMD.Grand Horn"
The bad ending can happen as a result of the final Fort Condor battle during the Huge Materia quest. If the enemy reaches the shack and you LOSE the fight against the CMD.Grand Horn, the fort is lost.
The party wakes up at the bottom of the hill, the rope leading you up to the fort is now gone and the Condor is now gone, presumably killed by Shinra troops. The dialogue here by the party, especially the unused text, heavily implies that the villagers were all killed as well. It's a super dark scenario.
14:17 "Unused text"
The TCRF article they link is woefully incomplete. It's easier to start reading than my own Unused Text Series, but I still recommend that he
link the Unused Text Series in the video description even if he won't mention it in the voiceover.
https://thelifestream.net/ffvii-the-original/final-fantasy-vii-the-unused-text-series/
15:07 "Chests covering unused background elements"
a fish's paradise: "This chest right here is actually covering up an unused sidequest pertaining to this book shelf"
There is no confirmation that the book shelf and its books were ever related to a sidequests.
Yes, it is curious that in the data this shelf has three books: One green, one red and one yellow, but with the green book never showing up in-game. Without any additional info to support a sidequest theory, it's equally likely that the books are merely a background element to embellish the scene.
Ergo, I disagree with the statement "actually covering up an unused sidequest".
15:23 "Mystery Panties"
a fish's paradise: "I assume this segment where you got them was cut out along with the other Honey Bee Inn content for being too icky"
Technically nothing wrong here, but in case he wants to edit the video to show the Mystery Panties being obtained,
I point to this timestamp.
15:50 "Secret cave in Ancient city"
It is a pity that he doesn't go into the probable theory that the cave was an exit from the Ancient Forest, but I won't insist on this segment being expanded.
16:10 "Original resolution backgrounds"
While it is true that the low-resolution backgrounds have been AI-upscaled to match or surpass what the original drawings might have been, I feel that it is misleading to title this "Original resolution backgrounds". It should instead be titled for what it is, "Backgrounds upscaled with machine learning". Perfectly okay with commentary saying something like "upscaled closer to what the backgrounds might have looked like before they were compressed for the PS1".
16:41 "Unused Fields"
HYOU14 is a speculative name for a field only shown in promotional artwork.
For a consistent experience I recommend not including any field names during this montage of unused background (that way he can show the ice cavern no problem). Or whatever works for them, so long as the name HYOU14 is not attached to this promotional image of an unused ice cavern field.
18:34 "Black Materia in Icicle Inn weapon shop"
This section is fine as is, but in the field data this Black Materia is called "goods" and so was probably a placeholder for what would eventually show this weapon shop's goods. Just mentioning this in case the video creator decides to expand the content.
20:30 "FFVII CG Collection DVD"
a fish's paradise refers to these videos as "uncompressed" which is a bold claim to make. Definitely "less compressed" than the PS1 versions, but the
DVD movies still suffer from conversion to the format.
Before that, let’s summarize the differences in performance between the PS and DVD FMVs:
– Toshiba’s versions have a higher saturation coupled with a stronger green tone. The exact conversion procedures may have been different, but a superficial comparison between the two makes me draw this conclusion.
– Due to the shift towards a stonger green tone, other color changes can be spotted, such as the Junon airport appearing more yellow.
– PS FMVs play at 320×224 resolution while most DVD FMVs play at 640×448 (when the black walls are removed). The opening FMV is the only exception with its 717×456 resolution.
– The color of the PS FMVs are probably closer to the original, as seen, for example, by Cloud’s pants being appropriately purple in the PS rendition versus more blue in the DVD file.
– Each frame in the PlayStation FMVs contained the ghost of its previous frame as a result of poor conversion. The Toshiba files show no ghosting.
a fish's paradise: "Thankfully there is a 1080p upload on YouTube for everyone to enjoy"
Each video in my playlist does technically allow you to choose "1080p", I don't remember if this is because of an error on my part or because of YouTube itself, but strictly speaking the videos are closer to 720p pr 480p. Changing to 1080p won't actually make the videos higher quality on YouTube. So the more correct commentary would be...
"Thankfully there is a YouTube playlist for everyone to enjoy these higher-quality cutscenes".
It would also make sense for him to actually
link the playlist in the video description.
21:48 "European manual memory card ad uses an unused map background"
The name "HYOU14" is speculative. It's better if the video just skipped the speculative name at this point and mentioned that the background shows up in full in promotional FF7 material.
29:30 "Hell House evolved to prey on homeless slum dwellers"
I might once again be misunderstanding the iceberg format, but why is this popular fan theory mentioned as though it is confirmed fact?
Agreed that the fan theory is no crazier than Hell House itself and indeed makes sense but far as I know we don't have word-of-god as to how much Hell House was considered on the world-building/lore level. Ideally, each item on the iceberg make clear distinctions between fact, speculation and popular headcanon.
29:48 "The Planet's name is Gaia/Gaea"
It is important to mention that no official guidebook or in-universe material actually identifies the planet as being called "Gaia". I should have given more feedback on the iceberg and insisted that this section be titled "The Planet's name is Gaia/Gaea...except it's not" for clarity.
Future titles might introduce new lore and decide on a canon name for the planet but at the time of writing that has not happened.
32:12 "beating the final opponent in 3D battler"
"...that if you actually did beat the final opponent, this dude right here would challenge you.
Probably not though."
The NPC decidedly does not challenge you so ending this segment with "Probably not though" irks my nitpicky side. I would have preferred if he ended with "
They don't [challenge you]".
35:14 "Sephiroth infects Cloud with red lifestream"
a fish's paradise: "you can see this red lifestream substance come out of Sephiroth and absorb into Cloud"
At no point is the red lifestream seen touching Cloud and it always remains distinct from the green mako until the red energy is then purified by the green. I feel that this item is particularly awkward because it relies so much on assuming that the red energy enters Cloud off-screen. Is it a popular fan theory? Is the red energy supposed to explain how Sephiroth keeps himself alive
"via
" Cloud? (Big quotation marks because Sephiroth technically doesn't need Cloud to stay alive between OG and AC, he only needs the
idea of Cloud) Without a better video script, this item doesn't work.