How would you re-write AC/C?

Flare

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^Cloud's not the only one with Jenova cells or mako enhancements though. Anyone who ever got to SOLDIER 3rd will have them too (just not as much as Cloud does).

Which would still make for an interesting sequel... what are you going to do if those enhancements turn out to be hereditary and there's now a whole portion of the population with them who were just born with them? Especially seeing as the origin of those enhancements was Shin-Ra?

Ooooh... hereditary SOLDIERs. Interesting idea. I've always wondered at this myself actually, if a SOLDIER has a child, would they inherit some Jenova cells, the way Sephiroth did? Maybe if it was a SOLDIER woman?

Anyway, I like the thought. Suddenly it's hereditary and now it's even harder to get rid of Jenova cells. :monster:

...and Jenova reawakens as the big bad?
 

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And it could still be called Advent Children! Excellent. Make it 10 years later rather than 2.
 

hian

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^Cloud's not the only one with Jenova cells or mako enhancements though. Anyone who ever got to SOLDIER 3rd will have them too (just not as much as Cloud does).

Which would still make for an interesting sequel... what are you going to do if those enhancements turn out to be hereditary and there's now a whole portion of the population with them who were just born with them? Especially seeing as the origin of those enhancements was Shin-Ra?

As far as the original goes that's kinda in the air I guess. Since no other Soldiers were mentioned, nor showed up for the reunion, I'm pretty sure the only soldiers considered by the original canon to have Jenova cells in them would be Sephiroth, and Cloud and Zack by extension since they were in turn subjected to Sephiroth's.
 

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When Cloud is talking to the party on the Highwind after him and Tifa go into the lifestream he specifically mentions getting injected with Jenova cells being part of the SOLDIER process, so that can't be it.
 

Loxetta

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There's also this shop owner in Junon. Saw this pointed out on tls a while back -- the shop owner, an ex-SOLDIER, dons a black cloak later in the game, but seems to have the willpower to stay out of Sephiroth's grip otherwise.

 

hian

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When Cloud is talking to the party on the Highwind after him and Tifa go into the lifestream he specifically mentions getting injected with Jenova cells being part of the SOLDIER process, so that can't be it.

Now, I don't have access to the Japanese script before I get home, but are you sure this isn't botched translation or simply an instance of "miss-typing" on par of the author where literally we're speaking of Sephiroth, or Cloud and Zack?


I mean, Zack was a soldier before Hojo experimented on him, so if he was already exposed to Jenova cells prior to that when would that have happened, and what would be the point of experimenting on him further?


And as I said, you don't see droves of Soldiers flocking to the reunion.


As for the shop-keeper in Junon, is he still there wearing a black cloak on disk 3 before the meteorfall? If not, I don't think that's an argument.
 

The Twilight Mexican

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It's always been that SOLDIERs were given Jenova cells (that part of the English script isn't a mistranslation). That's not something out of the Compilation.

And of course the accessory shop owner in Junon is a good argument -- literally the only NPC who isn't a Sephiroth copy and feels compelled to put on a black cloak (to his own confusion; he even remarks that it's out of season) is a former member of SOLDIER. He wouldn't be forced to the Reunion, though (nor would any SOLDIER), due to the fact he was in SOLDIER, and so must have had a strong sense of self.
 

Odysseus

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Here's the line in English:

Cloud- "You see, someone in SOLDIER isn't simply exposed to Mako energy. Their bodies are actually injected with Jenova cells…"

And in Japanese:

Cloud- 「ソルジャーは魔晄をあびるだけじゃない」「実は、体内にジェノバ細胞を
うめこまれた人間なんだ……」

As for the shop keeper, he's still around in disk 3. You can't even go to that shop on disk two until after the north cave any way.
 

hian

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damn, then that means I've found another plot hole in the original.

Get this, when Cloud, Sephiroth and Zack walk into Nibelheim, non of them knew what Jenova was. That would mean that unlike Mako exposure, Jenova cell therapy would have had to have happened to soldiers without their knowledge.
Now, first problem - nothing changes Clouds knowledge base on this topic between the Nibelheim incident and the scene in the air-ship. He should still be unaware of this at that point.
Second problem, if we assume, although I can't remember the exact dialogue, that the monsters in Nibel Reactor reveal this fact, that I think would suggest that, in addition to Sephiroth being exposed to Jenova cells as a fetus, and Cloud and Zack being exposed to Sephiroth cells in turn rather than pure Jenova cells, that human adults could not withstand pure Jenova cells to begin with.


It begs lots of questions like, if regular adult soldiers could be subjected to Jenova cells without issues why they would even bother injecting a fetus to begin with, or why the would bother injecting people with Sephiroth's cells when he literally is just a human with Jenova cells.


The will argument is alsopretty strange. Except for a select few situations where Cloud is being directly forced to do things, Jenova influences its host on the sub-conscious level, having it do one thing for one reason, whilst thinking its for another. That has nothing to do with sense of self or will-power, but we can probably write that objection of as Nojima etc not knowing jack shit about psychology.


But I think the main point still stands - if indeed all soldiers get injected with Jenova cells either it would be common knowledge and the Sephiroth break down falls apart, or it was a secret which Soldier weren't privy to and Cloud has never been exposed to, begging the question where the hell his assertion is coming from =s
I might be seriously misrembering this but who would have informed him of this?
 

The Twilight Mexican

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I don't think the mutated humans from the reactor were supposed to reveal anything about Jenova (they were just exposed to excessive mako, if I recall correctly), but this question is answered easily enough:

hian said:
It begs lots of questions like, if regular adult soldiers could be subjected to Jenova cells without issues why they would even bother injecting a fetus to begin with, or why the would bother injecting people with Sephiroth's cells when he literally is just a human with Jenova cells.
They weren't originally trying to use Jenova to enhance humans for combat purposes. Thinking Jenova was a Cetra, Sephiroth was supposed to be an Ancient born in the modern era who could lead Shin-Ra to endless mako. The military applications didn't take long, but that was secondary.

hian said:
The will argument is alsopretty strange. Except for a select few situations where Cloud is being directly forced to do things, Jenova influences its host on the sub-conscious level, having it do one thing for one reason, whilst thinking its for another. That has nothing to do with sense of self or will-power, but we can probably write that objection of as Nojima etc not knowing jack shit about psychology.
A person with a weak will would succumb to mako poisoning, making them unfit for SOLDIER. With the Sephiroth Copy Project, that's the result Hojo wanted (making Cloud a poor candidate for SOLDIER but a great Sephiroth copy): break the subject's mind down with mako, then allow the Reunion directive from Jenova to take over.

hian said:
I think the main point still stands - if indeed all soldiers get injected with Jenova cells either it would be common knowledge and the Sephiroth break down falls apart, or it was a secret which Soldier weren't privy to and Cloud has never been exposed to, begging the question where the hell his assertion is coming from =s
I might be seriously misrembering this but who would have informed him of this?
That is a bit of a plothole. He could have overheard Hojo talking about it while under his "care," I suppose. That's probably what happened since he knew the same process used for SOLDIER was used on him.
 

hian

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I don't think the mutated humans from the reactor were supposed to reveal anything about Jenova (they were just exposed to excessive mako, if I recall correctly), but this question is answered easily enough.

That's what I thought too, but then I also remember Sephiroth going on about how he was just like them or something like that.

They weren't originally trying to use Jenova to enhance humans for combat purposes. Thinking Jenova was a Cetra, Sephiroth was supposed to be an Ancient born in the modern era who could lead Shin-Ra to endless mako. The military applications didn't take long, but that was secondary.

Yeah, if we follow the time-line that Soldier began with Sephiroth it makes sense because then every Soldier injected with Jenova cells would follow the results of the that experiment, but you yourself struggle with this in another thread on the time-line, because so much suggest that Soldier predates Sephiroth.

So which is it?

A person with a weak will would succumb to mako poisoning, making them unfit for SOLDIER. With the Sephiroth Copy Project, that's the result Hojo wanted (making Cloud a poor candidate for SOLDIER but a great Sephiroth copy): break the subject's mind down with mako, then allow the Reunion directive from Jenova to take over.

That doesn't really address the point. My point is that Jenova clearly influences people's sub-conscience and that is not something that will-power as anything to do with in terms of psychology.
I can excuse it on the basis that Nojima probably isn't educated on the topic, but it's still something that's a bit flimsy.
I mean the shop-keeper in Junon, although not going to to reunion was still being influenced to some degree.
This seems to imply that Nojima thinks that "power of will" is like this MMORPG passive skill that protects you even without conscious effort from things moving about in your sub-conscience which is ridiculous.

But as I said, it's excusable and not a real problem for the plot. Just kinda stupid.

That is a bit of a plothole. He could have overheard Hojo talking about it while under his "care," I suppose. That's probably what happened since he knew the same process used for SOLDIER was used on him.

I think we should avoid sentences like that. Since nothing really happened to begin with (since this is just a story) the only things that happen are the things that are stated to happen by the author.
Everything else is our rationalizations.
Would what you suggest be a satisfactory explanation? Yes. Was it provided, or even implied by the plot? No, so it's still a plot hole.

If we were to limit the term plot-hole to mean only things so dissonant that no rationalization could ever cover it, hardly anything would be a plot-hole =P

That being said, I think my new plot could work well either way.

If we accept that there are more remnants of Jenova out there, that just widens the scope of scenarios I could use.

Now instead of forcing Cloud to deal with the tragedy of one of his children being the bad guy, we could just invent some other ex-soldier out there who had a child, and pit that child against Clouds.

I also thought of another venue today, although it stretches incredulity -
Imagine if Jenova wasn't one of a kind, but merely one of many similar life-forms floating around in space.
Now imagine that the meteor summoned had another host on it, which is now festering in the ruins of Midgar among the rubble and broken meteor pieces - like a "second coming from the sky".

You could even tie the two plot together going the route that Jenova and this other being shares an affinity for each-other and that this being ultimately is what triggers the Jenova reaction in the soldier children.

Going that route you are in a sense rehashing the original plot of FFVII though, which is exactly what I was criticizing AC for, so maybe not the best idea =P
 
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The Twilight Mexican

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I don't think the mutated humans from the reactor were supposed to reveal anything about Jenova (they were just exposed to excessive mako, if I recall correctly), but this question is answered easily enough.

That's what I thought too, but then I also remember Sephiroth going on about how he was just like them or something like that.
Yeah, but he didn't really know anything about Jenova yet at that point either.

hian said:
Yeah, if we follow the time-line that Soldier began with Sephiroth it makes sense because then every Soldier injected with Jenova cells would follow the results of the that experiment, but you yourself struggle with this in another thread on the time-line, because so much suggest that Soldier predates Sephiroth.

So which is it?
It's still fine if SOLDIER came before him. That doesn't have bearing on the purpose of the Jenova Project simply because results from it were found to have applications in other departments.

hian said:
That doesn't really address the point. My point is that Jenova clearly influences people's sub-conscience and that is not something that will-power as anything to do with in terms of psychology.
I can excuse it on the basis that Nojima probably isn't educated on the topic, but it's still something that's a bit flimsy.
I mean the shop-keeper in Junon, although not going to to reunion was still being influenced to some degree.
This seems to imply that Nojima thinks that "power of will" is like this MMORPG passive skill that protects you even without conscious effort from things moving about in your sub-conscience which is ridiculous.

But as I said, it's excusable and not a real problem for the plot. Just kinda stupid.
Strength of will/heart is one of the most common storytelling tropes. It shouldn't be harder to swallow here than anywhere else.

For that matter, unless you wanted Cloud to be the one to kill Aerith, it was genuinely better this way. =P

hian said:
That is a bit of a plothole. He could have overheard Hojo talking about it while under his "care," I suppose. That's probably what happened since he knew the same process used for SOLDIER was used on him.

I think we should avoid sentences like that. Since nothing really happened to begin with (since this is just a story) the only things that happen are the things that are stated to happen by the author.
Everything else is our rationalizations.
Would what you suggest be a satisfactory explanation? Yes. Was it provided, or even implied by the plot? No, so it's still a plot hole.
No one said it was provided or that this isn't a plot hole. Did you want a rationalization or didn't you?

hian said:
Going that route you are in a sense rehashing the original plot of FFVII though, which is exactly what I was criticizing AC for, so maybe not the best idea =P
I had that precise thought while reading it. =P
 
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hian

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It's still fine if SOLDIER came before him. That doesn't have bearing on the purpose of the Jenova Project simply because results from it were found to have applications in other departments.

1.) We're not talking about the bearing on the purpose of the Jenova project, we're talking about the fact that depending on whether or not the project happened prior to, or after the fact of SOLDIER determines whether or not Shinra would know that Jenova cells increased a person's combative potential, and depending on that, whether the claim that members of SOLDIER were injected with Jenova cells as well as showered with Mako makes sense or not.

2.) No it isn't fine because by your own statement in the original post which you echo here, when you say Jenova cells for combative purposes were secondary to the use in Sephiroth to create an ancient, you're saying that the combative purposes were found when Sephiroth was created.

I.E If SOLDIER predates Sephiroth, and Jenova cells benefits where found in the Jenova Project, then why would SOLDIERs have Jenova cells injected into them prior to the Jenova project?

The best scenario we can get to at that point is that members of SOLDIER made ater Sephiroth displaying his battle capabilities would then go on to be subjected to Jenova cells.

As loath as I am to quote it, here's an FF wiki page quote :

Approximately 30 years before the beginning of Final Fantasy VII, the Jenova Project was initiated to produce a human-Cetra hybrid using the cells from Jenova (mistaken to be a Cetra) and Mako Energy from the Planet. The result was Sephiroth, who, although not having the powers of a Cetra as originally intended, was a child with exceptional abilities. Shinra recognized his potential and a method was planned to mass produce more fighters of his type.
Great. Okay, so they start putting Jenova cells in SOLDIER, the Nibelheim incident happens, and Hojo start putting Sephiroth cells into Zack because...?
No seriously, now things are just getting silly. Here you have a SOLDIER, injected with pure Jenova cells, showered in Mako, then locked up in a tank to be subjected to essentially what amounts to diluted Jenova cells from Sephiroth and more Mako showers...

Strength of will/heart is one of the most common storytelling tropes. It shouldn't be harder to swallow here than anywhere else.

Except that in most stories of strength of will/heart you have people consciously fighting overt threats, like Zack facing insurmountable odds at the end of CC etc. not people's strength of will magically protecting them from things they aren't even aware of attacking their sub-conscience.

I also haven't said it's hard to swallow, just that it's sub-par writing. Alluding to the existence of other sub-par writing doesn't exactly negate or do anything to address the point.

For that matter, unless you wanted Cloud to be the one to kill Aerith, it was genuinely better this way. =P

That scene doesn't factor into this though, because it's a much more blatant and overt attack not just on Cloud's sub-conscience, but his actual conscience.

Compare Cloud chasing Sephiroth thinking it's to save the world when he's really just being guided towards the reunion, where you have two different reasons combining into a single behavior, versus Jenova/Sephiroth specifically trying to force Cloud to do something which is the exact opposite of what Cloud wants to do, and totally uncharacteristic of him.

No one said it was provided or that this isn't a plot hole. Did you want a rationalization or didn't you?

Sorry, when you said "a bit of a plot-hole" I took that to mean you somehow felt it was less than a regular plot-hole.

As for rationalizations - no, that's not what I want. What I want is feed-back so I don't have to go back and re-read the original script and the guide-books every time I think I've found another plot-hole. There are times when I misremember or miss out on things, and as such, there will be times when conceived plot-holes are actually properly addressed in the source material.

So, when I raise a point like that, and somebody retorts with a rationalization, that is frustrating because that's literally the opposite of what I want - namely someone using their own ideas to justify something the author failed, or forgot to do.
 

Flare

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That doesn't really address the point. My point is that Jenova clearly influences people's sub-conscience and that is not something that will-power as anything to do with in terms of psychology.

Just to ask, you think that Jenova is always manipulating the back of someone's mind (subconscious) and that they can't do anything about it? I'm not quite sure.

I thought it always came across that the strong will was something you needed more for the Jenova cells being injected in you, than the mako. Probably it's essential for both things. Mako is a strong substance that comes from the Planet, Jenova is an extraterrestrial alien with a strong mind, albeit likely in some comatose state. Regardless of Jenova's state it still can influence people, but I've always been under the impression that yes, people with a strong will can fight off her influence.

Even if it's a subconscious level that she's affecting people on, a high strength of will could be reflected subconsciously as well to deflect that, I would think.

Then again I don't know if you want to get extremely technical. The mind is a ppwerful thing and I don't believe that some foreign willpower can nestle in your subconscious and you have no say in if it'll control you or not.

Then again I'm not sure if that's what you were saying anyway so I'm shutting up now :monster:
 

ForceStealer

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Sephiroth said he was just like the makonoids because they were monsters. And he had determined that he was also a monster. That's what he says. What would Jenova have to do with it?

Great. Okay, so they start putting Jenova cells in SOLDIER, the Nibelheim incident happens, and Hojo start putting Sephiroth cells into Zack because...?
No seriously, now things are just getting silly. Here you have a SOLDIER, injected with pure Jenova cells, showered in Mako, then locked up in a tank to be subjected to essentially what amounts to diluted Jenova cells from Sephiroth and more Mako showers...

Because Hojo's crazy, and not a very good scientist? Do I need to provide evidence for this? What is your question?

I'm afraid I've rather lost the point of what you're trying to establish here. You say either SOLDIER receiving Jenova cells would be common knowledge and so Sephiroth's break down wouldn't make sense, or it is not common knowledge and Cloud somehow discovered it. It's obviously the latter, even if it is a plot hole in the sense that we were not shown how Cloud learned it.

I'm not sure what this stuff has to do with it:

Except that in most stories of strength of will/heart you have people consciously fighting overt threats, like Zack facing insurmountable odds at the end of CC etc. not people's strength of will magically protecting them from things they aren't even aware of attacking their sub-conscience.

I also haven't said it's hard to swallow, just that it's sub-par writing. Alluding to the existence of other sub-par writing doesn't exactly negate or do anything to address the point.

For that matter, unless you wanted Cloud to be the one to kill Aerith, it was genuinely better this way. =P

That scene doesn't factor into this though, because it's a much more blatant and overt attack not just on Cloud's sub-conscience, but his actual conscience.

Compare Cloud chasing Sephiroth thinking it's to save the world when he's really just being guided towards the reunion, where you have two different reasons combining into a single behavior, versus Jenova/Sephiroth specifically trying to force Cloud to do something which is the exact opposite of what Cloud wants to do, and totally uncharacteristic of him.

Okay. Yeah, the fact that Cloud nearly kills Aerith, and that he repeatedly hands over the Black Materia is evidence of why he was rejected from SOLDIER, his weak will/sense of self. That could still absolutely affect how susceptible you are to subconscious suggestion as well. The shop owner received the same suggestion, presumably, to travel to the Northern Crater, but he clearly had a firm enough grasp on his life and purpose that he didn't. But the more subtle cloak thing was a suggestion he responded to as it wasn't directly counter to anything else he wanted to accomplish.

But again, what are we discussing?

No one said it was provided or that this isn't a plot hole. Did you want a rationalization or didn't you?

Sorry, when you said "a bit of a plot-hole" I took that to mean you somehow felt it was less than a regular plot-hole.

Well I don't know what a "regular" plot hole is, but I would wager that this one ("how did Cloud learn of SOLDIERs receiving Jenova cells?") is probably pretty low on the totem pole.

As for rationalizations - no, that's not what I want. What I want is feed-back so I don't have to go back and re-read the original script and the guide-books every time I think I've found another plot-hole. There are times when I misremember or miss out on things, and as such, there will be times when conceived plot-holes are actually properly addressed in the source material.

So, when I raise a point like that, and somebody retorts with a rationalization, that is frustrating because that's literally the opposite of what I want - namely someone using their own ideas to justify something the author failed, or forgot to do.

So, what, you want just want a 'yes' or a 'no'? Why, are you writing a book on plot holes? Are you keeping score somewhere? You are likely going to run into plot holes in all kinds of works no matter how good the writing is. Especially when you apparently define it as "absolutely anything that was not 100% spelled out, no matter how inconsequential."

And no, I'm not just being defensive of FF7's writing, I just don't understand your goal here.
 

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Cloud mentions the Jenova cells being used in SOLDIER members after being in the Lifestream, right?
Is it too much of a stretch to believe that he could've gotten that knowledge from the Lifestream after being inside of it and surviving? Just curious.
 

ForceStealer

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He definitely could have, though Tres' supposition of him simply picking it up in Shinra Manor, or piecing it together himself are likely more straightforward explanations.

But we don't want rationalizations, remember :monster:
 

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I'd also remove the Wolf too, since, despite it supposedly being Zack's spirit keeping an eye on Cloud, that was just extremely un-necessery.
 

hian

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Just to ask, you think that Jenova is always manipulating the back of someone's mind (subconscious) and that they can't do anything about it? I'm not quite sure.

No, I think it's obvious that Jenova does both. The point is that your strength of will, in terms of real world psychology, is only relevant to explicit and overt, and since a large part of Jenova's manipulation also happens sub-consciously and indeed Cloud essentially heading to the Reunion was entirely done sub-consciously, and Jenova even sub-consciously making ex-soldiers don black robes makes it a case of special pleading when you then state that their strength of will supposedly stopped them from joining the reunion.

After all, it's not like Cloud was overtly forced, against his will, to walk all the way up to the North crater.
Sure he was forced to raise his blade to Aerith and to hand over the black materia, but him walking all the way to the renuion happened without him knowing he was even being manipulated, and what I am saying is that the excuse that the Junon shop-keeper didn't do the same is because of his "strength of will" doesn't cut it in that context.

Even if it's a subconscious level that she's affecting people on, a high strength of will could be reflected subconsciously as well to deflect that, I would think.

That's not how real psychology work.
Take the example of the demonstration technique for negative psychological suggestion -
I tell you not to think of black cat, and you will immediately do so to one degree or another. Your "strength of will" never comes into the picture.
The human psyche can be manipulated in many ways, and most of your psyche you have no conscious control of what so ever.

In either case though - it's not a real point to keep harping on about. I've already clarified that I consider it a relative non-issue because I don't expect a fantasy writer for a game to have extensive knowledge of human psychology and neuroscience.

Sephiroth said he was just like the makonoids because they were monsters. And he had determined that he was also a monster. That's what he says. What would Jenova have to do with it?

Don't get me wrong. I was not making an argument with the question, I just couldn't remember the scene exactly and was hoping someone could give me the exact context for it in the thread so I wouldn't have to waste time looking it up =P

Because Hojo's crazy, and not a very good scientist? Do I need to provide evidence for this? What is your question?

Except the times when he isn't. This is another argument that people like to apply all willy nilly. Clearly Hojo is sane enough to successfully complete certain experiments, and to think rationally most of the time.
Hojo was without scruples certainly - a completely deranged person doing random experiments without clear rationales on the other hand?

Yes, I'd need some sort of argument to support that view.

My question is which should be apparent if you can read -
Why would Hojo make a project injecting Zack with cells Zack was already supposed to have been injected with?

Cloud makes sense to a certain extent, because he would not have been exposed to Jenova cells (but why Hojo would use Sephiroth cells when he had Jenova cells at his disposal to create "Sephiroth clones" to prove a theory relating to the biological properties of Jenova is beyond me, but I guess we'll have to write that down to "Hojo's madness too, and not the writers lack of comprehension of basic biology and consistent writing)

I'm afraid I've rather lost the point of what you're trying to establish here. You say either SOLDIER receiving Jenova cells would be common knowledge and so Sephiroth's break down wouldn't make sense, or it is not common knowledge and Cloud somehow discovered it. It's obviously the latter, even if it is a plot hole in the sense that we were not shown how Cloud learned it.

I just established that there's a plot-hole, and that plot-hole being Cloud's magically knowing something he was never shown to have been privy to.

I'm not sure what this stuff has to do with it:

That stuff has nothing to do with that point. It's a separate issue altogether which would be patently obvious if you followed the entire exchange.

Okay. Yeah, the fact that Cloud nearly kills Aerith, and that he repeatedly hands over the Black Materia is evidence of why he was rejected from SOLDIER, his weak will/sense of self. That could still absolutely affect how susceptible you are to subconscious suggestion as well. The shop owner received the same suggestion, presumably, to travel to the Northern Crater, but he clearly had a firm enough grasp on his life and purpose that he didn't. But the more subtle cloak thing was a suggestion he responded to as it wasn't directly counter to anything else he wanted to accomplish.

And my point is that this is not how psychology works, which is why it's flimsy writing. I was simply pointing that out.

Well I don't know what a "regular" plot hole is, but I would wager that this one ("how did Cloud learn of SOLDIERs receiving Jenova cells?") is probably pretty low on the totem pole.

All plot holes are plot holes. I don't rank them on a scale of how much they break a plot alone, but on how often they occur. It becomes more and more obvious the more you look at FFVII's plot, that it's riddled with them like a Swiss Cheese is with regular holes.

It's something that I've pointed out before, which a lot of people here took issue with at the time.

So, what, you want just want a 'yes' or a 'no'? Why, are you writing a book on plot holes? Are you keeping score somewhere? You are likely going to run into plot holes in all kinds of works no matter how good the writing is. Especially when you apparently define it as "absolutely anything that was not 100% spelled out, no matter how inconsequential."

What's it to you? How is my motivation in any way relevant? I asked a question, and I expect, like most ordinary people, that people who address that question will address it with the intent of answering what is being asked - not by providing an answer to something that was never asked, which would be irrelevant.

Why answer at all if you don't intent to answer what is being asked?

And no, I'm not just being defensive of FF7's writing, I just don't understand your goal here.

My question does not require you to understand my reason for asking it. It merely requires someone answer it.

To clarify though - I am asking it simply because I wanted an accurate sense of what is explicitly stated throughout the plot of FFVII, so that my apprehension of it as it's written isn't based on assumption founded on what people have projected into the subject matter due to having filled in blanks based on their own particular sensibilities.

The fact of the matter is that if I asked you what happened here with Cloud suddenly knowing this information he's not supposed to know, and you answer "Well, he obviously picked it up in the tank during the experiments" you are not actually truthfully answering the question, because that never actually happened.
It's an assumption, good or bad, and I am not interested in that.

As I said, all I want to know is the factual series of events that are explicit to FFVII's narrative so I know exactly what has been said, and what hasn't.

But we don't want rationalizations, remember

Take your sarcastic condescension somewhere else Force - it is not called for in any way shape or form.

I am not talking on behalf of of anyone, and you are all free to speculate about how to head-canon away plot-hole to your heart's content.
However, is it really so unreasonable to expect you to do that with someone who actually cares about that amongst yourself, and not me while replying to a specific question only I asked?
You really think that's a productive way to have an exchange?

Cloud mentions the Jenova cells being used in SOLDIER members after being in the Lifestream, right?
Is it too much of a stretch to believe that he could've gotten that knowledge from the Lifestream after being inside of it and surviving? Just curious.

I think that's a bigger stretch than overhearing Hojo during the experiments.
Lifestream information is vast. That Cloud would just happen to stumble across pertinent information like that, be able to separate it from the mountains of other information, and make sense of it on top of it beggars belief to my mind.

Anyways, I think this conversation has overstayed its welcome.

It's been established that Cloud wasn't the only remaining person in the world with Jenova cells, and that's that.
I still found that direction in the writing less satisfactory than had Soldiers simply been people showered in Mako, and Cloud/Sephiroth/Zack/the other black robed experiments from that specific period in time being the only exceptions with the Jenova cells (seeing as that one wouldn't entail the plot-holes that follow from having Jenova cell processed Soldiers), but it is what it is though.

If Soldier predates Sephiroth, and Sephiroth was the first human experiment involving Jenova cells, all Soldiers predating Sephiroth would be non-Jenova soldiers.
If all Soldiers follow the creation of Sephiroth, then it would follow that all of them could be Jenova cell processed but that would mean that Soldier only began existing with Sephiroth and the Wutai war, which if I remember correctly, creates issues with the compilation time-line.

If they'd just said that all Soldiers were Mako processed, only Sephiroth and his clones were Jenova cell processed, the problems would all disappear.
That's why it would be a better option for the flow of the story to my mind, but alas, it isn't so I couldn't have rewritten AC based on that perception of the plot, which, as Force so was keen to know, was my initial motivation for asking the question ;
To ascertain what basic premises my rewrite of AC would have had to be based on to be consistent with the original.

This has now been ascertained, end of story.
 
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Mayo Master

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Clearly Hojo is sane enough to successfully complete certain experiments, and to think rationally most of the time.
Hojo was without scruples certainly - a completely deranged person doing random experiments without clear rationales on the other hand?

Yes, I'd need some sort of argument to support that view.

My question is which should be apparent if you can read -
Why would Hojo make a project injecting Zack with cells Zack was already supposed to have been injected with?
Just a little note so it's out there: IMO whenever Hojo is given screentime, even though he is presented as a scientist, he pretty much never behaves as such. While he stands as "the mad scientist", he sure checks the "mad" box, but falls short in the science department. He merely does a bunch of experiments based on a whimsical approach, following "spurs of creativity" and then shouts "I'm a genius", mostly because even a broken clock can display the correct time twice a day. Sure, trial and error is a valid empirical approach, but there's hardly any sense of direction in his experimentation. I have not seen many (if any) instances where Hojo applies rigorous methodology or analytical thinking.
 

Octo

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Hojo is the kind of guy who burns ciggarette holes in old LPs in his bedroom and calls it 'science' :monster:
 
Hojo is the kind of guy who burns ciggarette holes in old LPs in his bedroom and calls it 'science' :monster:
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Another tiny rewrite I would do. Recall this memorial that reveals when Meteorfall happened:

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So FFVII begins on [ ν ] – εуλ 0007, December 9th and ends on [ ν ] – εуλ 0008, January 21st. That is no more than 43 days from beginning to end! Keep in mind also that for seven of those days Tifa is in a coma.

Many fans agree that this is a way too short timespan for the game to take place in. I belong to that camp and I would AT THE VERY LEAST change the 2 to a 3 on the Meteorfall memorial sign so that Meteorfall happened on January 31st (which also happens to be the release date of the original FFVII :awesome:). With the short timespan we have been given, every day added to the count feels like a victory.
 
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